The illustration in combination with the green tee (not tea) makes it look like the hippo splattered all over you.



Hope you like it!

Look at it's nose!

Very nice concept, i must say.

I suggest if you can add more splatters also if you can get rid of the circular shape of the white thing.

one more thing y? don you put "sorry" in talking bubble near the head.

chk out mine http://threadless.com/sharedesign/218464/Run_Run_Run

B R I L L I A N T ! !

Itīs really nice your tee design.

I prefered in other colour, but itīs ok.

And...try to put sorry in another placed...is rare there.



Can you help me, please?

very cute hippo but it is not really apparrent that he has sneezed



not sure how you can fix that..... maybe reversing the white/green so it is more of a sneeze spray and making it more globby and snotty



would appreciate your feedback

Finally I got the chance to make a new version. It's been a while but here it is. Hope you like it!

interesting. question, whats the back look like then? is there going to be any design behind? else the white parts will seem cut off

The tee is olive green and the print is white, black, grey (light and dark) and dark green. The white will not be cut off because the booger is following the downwards line on both sides. The back will show a bit off white on the bottom but it will be mostly green.

interesting...very creative..

if u dont mind??

I'm not sure that the text is necessary, I think the expression on his face is enough. Cool ideal.

thanks for the comment. I agree with sheaman about the text. Really cool concept.

I as well agree that the text isn't necessary. I think it explains itself.

personally, i like the text. It conveys the embarassment of the hippo which is kinda what i like about the shirt- the personification of the hippo.

I agree with the comments in the previous version... Without the text "sorry" it's still is clear enough.

OK please dont hate me but I really like the style of the 1st version - the drips now look a bit "udderish" to me :)

I agree about losing the text - most Tl'ers don't seem to like text on tees unless its a type tee.

Such a cute idea - this could make a great kids tee. Have you thought of using some of the TL model photos on Flickr? There's also kids photos there you could use with this sub to really help with votes!

thx for your comments too btw!

what if the animal looks bigger? don't get me wrong, i love this version.



Please take a look at this whenever you have time, thank you.

ewooeww boogers, nice tho

check mine

thats pretty adorable and gross

gross but cool. make the drips more spontaneous, so it doesn't look like a bunch of udders. thanks for the critique on mine.

cute idea, snot looks better now



feel free to score mine

hehe... cute and gross!

is nice!! submit this man...



please comment mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49058/GingerSpying

maybe achoooo would be a better word, hahhaah

cute!



check mine out if you have a chance

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48906/ninja_killed_my_family

The idea is hilarious. It could be better to go for a more vibrant and brighter green though-to fit with the cartoon style.

This is sort of a gross suggestion, but maybe more snot, like around the hippo, so as to tie him into the rest of the image?



If you don't mind, would you leave a comment and vote on my Panda?