8 color, i prefer it on the blue jean color tee.

Hmm, I don't really see the rain on the shirt, and I'm not sure about the teeth (my gaze travels right past them), but other than that, I like it.



Critique mine?

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the rain shows up a lot better on the blue jean colored shirt. thanks for the feedback.

I would make the rain drops fatter, and bring the teeth inwards more towards the center of the mouth.

Thanks for the comments.



Sweet design. My only suggestions would be try it on a different colour tee, possibly a sand, brown or grey? Maybe make the head a little bit smaller and the cloud slightly bigger. Other than that its Ace.



Keep up the good work!

haha i love it! not sure about the green on blue, and you say the rain shows up on blue jean colour? maybe upload a picture of the other colour cause id like to see how the rain and face work on a different colour



also, have a look at mine :) id appreciate any suggestions you got :) critique

thanks i am definitely going to take the suggestions i got so far, so i will repost shortly, i am real happy with all the suggestions i think they will definitely help me out.

give him hair and make it oversized!

also try experimenting with tee color



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i was thuinking about oversized but i just couldnt really decide, anybody else agree with oversized? not sure about the hair but i will experiment, it could work.

I really love the character! I agree with the other comments about the color. I would like to see it on maybe a dark grey shirt. Good work!

cool character dude! i like it



If you don't mind please take a look my design :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46993/Princess_and_the_Frog



Thx

I think you might try a lower placement of the character and an enlarged rain-cloud above him. But overall, very cool design.

I like it alot!

thanks for the comments! i agree comfortador

thanks for all the comments they defintiely helped me out, i played aroung with the placement and the composition too. i think i want to use a puff ink for the cloud and the rain. let me now what u think. thanks!!!

Love it! I think the raindrops are much better in this version. I like the placement of the teeth in this version also and the shading is great! Of the two color options here, I prefer it on the grey, but I would still like to see it on a darker color. Good luck!

nice, but... mmmmmm..., can you add something else there?



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Thanks for the comments dude. Really appreciate it!



Could you work a little more detail into the cloud? Or are you limited by colours here?



Other than that I think its ace. Really neat design!



I have a new version, could you check it out?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47523/Dandilion_Snatcher

Honestly, I like the face in the background, with the feathered mask. I think the face might look better if it's on the shirt like that.



Check my V3 if you can: http://www.threadless.com/critique/47756/And_the_Dish_Ran_Away_Again

Hi thank you for your critique. I think you could try making the illustration slightly smaller. i like a lot the character !

just wanted try this out, a couple people said i should so lets see if a couple more think its a good idea.

thanks for the comments so far.

This is so much better.:) Have you tried it on darker colors?lack maybe? I think this would make a really fun kid's shirt!:)

Love it

dark colors.... perhaps there will be a 4th version up here :)

Is there a way to extend the face across the sleeves?



I love the design though. I'd definitely buy it.

no entirely sure about this one i think the main thing that is bothering me is the sleeves if you are gonna do it this was i think it need image on the sleeves too

I guess it would look cool on the sleeves too, if that's possible. I'd still like to see it on black or something darker.



can u check mine?

Alternatively you could have the face end some time before it hits the borders of the sleeve. Some ears perhaps...



... also, I don't understand why the face fades out. Maybe you should finish the chin and then let the neck fade.



Otherwise, it looks great! Love the colors.



Will you look at mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47762/Common_Breath_1