Critique this t-shirt design: "awesome future funk sexy" - a WIP (work in progress)

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Work in progress by:

tesco
on Jun 29 '07

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Version 2 - 502 days ago

tesco on Jun 29 '07

I wanted something in my critique section so I did this awesome shirt. What do you think? I might add some wings or something, I dunno. I got a bit stuck after putting yeah on the shoulders

tesco on Jun 29 '07

man who said dont submit and didnt comment? fucker

noponies on Jun 29 '07

Fuck that is rad.

Now, if you put a face on that heart, or better yet a icecream on the heart with a face I'l fly over to the states and buy it right now!

kissmeimshitfaced on Jun 29 '07

I love

tesco on Jun 29 '07

I might put a magenta stroke round the sleeve stripes

Bramish on Jun 29 '07

I think you need to work on your style.

tesco on Jun 29 '07

thats my line you bastard

noponies on Jun 29 '07

yep, magenta or some vivid RGB solid green. You aint used your colour budget up yet, so get on with it

How can I press submit this more than once?

tesco on Jun 29 '07

I cant use anymore than three colours, the software I use doesn't allow it

Bramish on Jun 29 '07

My problem is, I have more muscular shoulders than Chris Benoit (before he went nuts and dead), so the YEAH would look all warped.

d3d on Jun 29 '07

it needs a fuckload of + signs.

danrule on Jun 29 '07

I laughed

katieroz on Jun 29 '07

i think i'm missing something.

Monkey III on Jun 29 '07

More dripping hearts!

Kojima on Jun 29 '07

Sounds like a Justin Timberlake album.

mj00 on Jun 29 '07

Needs more diamonds.

4 days later

Chelle Belle on Jul 04 '07

More hearts!

25 days later

chelly on Jul 29 '07

the text should be like a sash as if shooting off the shirt and into the future :)

350 days later

reamontime on Jul 14 '08

I just noticed that it says "Awesome" at the bottom of the shirt. Maybe make that a leetle clearer not much though

reamontime on Jul 14 '08

oh, otherwise I really like it. It's so fresh

tesco on Jul 14 '08

it actually says awso me - which is totally different.

I've already sold this design to DBH but thanks for the input.

fatheed on Jul 14 '08

VERSION 2 PLS

v2 awesome future funk sexy, current version

Work in progress by:

tesco
on Jul 14 '08

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Version 1 - 883 days ago

Version 2 - 502 days ago

speedyjvw on Jul 14 '08

inverted ftw

fatheed on Jul 14 '08

60 to 80 percent better. Can't wait for version 3.

danrule on Jul 14 '08

i love your graphixxx

81 days later

Dreamerbox on Oct 03 '08

i like these color schemes

annienaseem on Oct 05 '08

what?

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