Cranes following an ultralight flying overhead.

hahaha cute! but i think you can make the cloud more interesting thou. Good job! :D



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I love the birds and ultralight, tho I'm a bit unsure about the cloud. It might just be me, but it looks upside down. Is it half-toned?

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I like it but would prefer it if the design wasn't on the arm.

What do you think of the new placement and cloud design? I can't decide if I like the clouds in front or behind the ultralight and cranes.

I think it'd look better with the clouds behind the ultralight.



Great design though! : )

I agree, clouds behind the ultralight.



perhaps make the birds/ultralight smaller and lower the saturation, so they look further away and "up there"

I agree about the clouds now that I look at it more.

Are the ultralight and cranes too small now?

Thanks for the comments!

Not too small, but there is too much empty space now.



House maybe? Hills?

ya too much empty space, and i got an idea maybe have the birds like carying the glider or something haha