please comment!

new title, colors? placement? etc....

I love it!

reminds me of the multicolored zebra gum that I used to always get.



Maybe vary the bottom of the drips, a little to matching.

I agree, vary the drips a little more, at the top and bottom. Otherwise, very cool

I really like this. I think the zebra and the color dripping off of it are very well rendered. I am not as convinced of the color pouring on to it. I think it needs further consideration. very good design though

sweeeeeettt nice graphic! Sub!



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I agree with more drips. How about adding to more colors? It just looks too heavy on some of the colors. How about a vibrant purple as well?



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This one too? Plz?

new version...

I change the the drips a little bit

please comment

aaaa and I add some colors too

Oh, cool! I think that you should get rid of the drips around the mouth area though, I think it makes it look a bit.......... Rabid, lol. Looks awesome though =] I'd certainly wear it!



Is this ready to submit yet? What do you think?

Wow yeah this is looking really good now! Although I'm not sure if I prefer only three colours rather than five?

Awesome. Submit!



It'd be great if you could critique my design - Never mind the tigers...



And / or vote for my first submission - Tiger-Bat

ready for a subbbb :D

prefer 3 colours and def get rid of the drips off the head, it is enough that the body is dripping and the ones off the head look a bit creepy like saliva



have you thought about having a herd of zebras....kind of a stand out from the crowd idea....or not....that may not be where you want to take this



would like your opinion

I like it, submit!



If you don't mind, would you take a look at my Panda?

wow, thanks for all this nice comments, they are really helpful....



what about the drips at the top?



and.. any idea for a new title

looks great but it's also vaguely familiar - i'm not certain if this has maybe been done before? i'll have a look round and see if i can find something like it, otherwise i really like. less drips round the mouth and it'll look great.

4 real??? if you find something similar please let me know!! thanks

there was a color zebra done before on a black shirt. i know its up on the kids section. i like this one a lot too! just fix the drips around the mouth then i'd give it a 5!

check out my critiques please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47387/Fly_Over_Me



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47386/Moonlit_Lovebirds

the splatters up top are cool accents. correct the mouth dripping.

nice design.

love it!





fly's dream

love it. Submit!

Yay! Looks really cool. Flattered you took advise. ^^ I think it's ready to submit. For the title, what about "Zebralis Polychromatics"?

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wooow "Zebralis Polychromatics" love it, thanks, for the good critiques, I'll try with les driping on the mouth for next V.

You're Welcome. ^^

It's nicely done, but I have seen something similar before, just not on a shirt. What about a paint splattered background of trees and brush etc. so that it's not so stark against the white. A zebras stripes are there to help camouflage them in the wild, camouflage this guy against some color.



If you have a chance I'd love some feedback on the following.

In The Weeds

&

Someone Loved Them Once



Thanks

Some little changes

please comment

I love the texture you added on teh ackground and the general design.

I think that you should add a little view of the zebra second ear.



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This is great !

the colours are much better in this version.

Maybe some placement ?

ah yeah, love the way you've mixed the colours up - way more interesting now.

i actually think it's almost ready - give us a new version with placement on and if it's all good you'll be done!



do you have any comments for me here please?

I just add the placement, ready???

Looks good to me!

thanks, any other comment??

i like it

very creative ... i love the colors

looks good to me



could you crit mine thanks

Yep, totally digging it. maybe on a grey shirt?

Do you mind checking mine out? thanks!

on gray??

any comments?

any comments?

better on white?

awesome stuff man! ur getting warmer there!



definitely looks great on grey or blue jean tee for me ;) just curious..have u tried playing with different levels of opacity? might give different visual effects..zebra designs sure is a fav. in threadless haha!



wht's ur views on mine?

This looks great. I prefer it on white but it works just as well on gray. I'd say submit.



please could you check mine out if you get the chance

Man I love it. It's awesome on grey. A total 5$ for me if I ever saw one. Submit!



Do you mind checking out mine or mine? Thanks!

it's ok on grey but i definitely prefer it on white.

that said, a lot of people are against pure white shirts - have you tried the silver grey instead - not as dark as this but not white either



any comments for me here please?

OK... hope this is the last version for critique....

comments?

Do it. Submit! 5$

and what about the title "Zebralis Polychromatics"

yo mpeon! close one eye n sub it man! it works wonderful on most tee colors u displayed...n zebralis polychromatics? well i suck at biology but tht sure is one spesies tht spells kick ass *LOL*

Perfecto! Submit!



Please crit mine when you get a chance!

It looks great, submit 5$

ok then.... I will Submit today under the name" zebralis poluchromatics" (thanks to Icko64 for the name)

thats it,submit

fly's dream

good luck! great illo/idea ;)

critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47100/My_Pre_Loved_Cup_of_Coffee

thanks!

In brown its just perfect. Really nice. One of the best designs I've ever seen on Threadless.



Could you please vote for my design

It looks really really great, but it's done so many times.