mmmmm im not sure about the hair

what about the halftone?

please comment

half tone still very cool for this but make the hair in one style. Love the idea :D



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I wonder how it would look to halftone the hair as well, after adding shading to it? Or, to keep things more balanced, perhaps a few more added things to the 'lisa? Such as a lip-ring, maybe? Otherwise, I like it!



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I think halftone for skin....and solid shapes for gown and hair....not blockish thouh add some detail/texture



would appreciate your opinion

It's a good idea... I'm just feeling the hair is not matching the halftoned image quite well... I think you have two ways to go... either make it more realistic to match better... or exagerate the difference maybe using some color (purple highlights for example)

it look better on fucsia

I add a lip ring, a nose ring, some eye deliner, nail polish, a ring, and some badass hair ;)

please comment

lovely. this would look really good blown up big on a t. curious to see what it would be like to pump up the contrast.









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http://www.threadless.com/critique/47411/Patience_Young_Grasshopper

great idea, but not happy about the EMO style.



The painting of the monalisa, if you notice, the face is like hiding a secret. Making the monalisa emo, as emo's self harm themselves; want to die etc. it doesn't reflect well, hope you'll understand =/.



What about giving it some

looks a lot better than v1. all the details you added really make a great overall effect.

the fucsia looks cool as well

mu only concern is the width of it at the bottom - it seems to get very wide which in turn makes her head looks a bit small... can you slim the base down a bit?

the width at the bottom is because, not all the background is removed.

tue width at the bottom is just for the placement (see V1) and the point here is that "controversy"

thanks for all the comments guys...

what about the EMO style?

it has a sad face dude, I removed the smile

ok, not sure about that outline its kinda too sharp, u should try to work it out in the same fashion as the rest..

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just get back the smile DUDEE, sad face is good for no one - or maybe you should have one 'cause you dont have enough good ideas, making a sad face on a paint like that.. pfff. i wish it was your portrait.

about .. i wish it was your portrait..

i forgot you are not GOOD ENOUGH

It's a neat idea, but sorry...I'm not digging the emoness of it. =/ Or the hot pink. heh. Maybe it's just not my thing.

I'd lose the hot pink, maybe put it on a grey shirt. Stick some headphones on her... a little more detail would go a long way.

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simpson.. sorry man, I´m not that good at inglish, hehe sorry, you dont have to be rude



yea grey shirt, would look great, and the headphones too



thanks

I know a lot of people who would wear this. ^^ I'd like to see it on

purple. Really cool idea. ^^



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This one too? Plz?

place this thing on a tee can't wait to see next version with placement and such.



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its not English but anyway, isnt headphones, that hair etc making the painting losing its sense?



sorry still fighting for this thing...

Simpson, with all due respect, please calm down. Obviously the style appeals to some people, and if it doesn't appeal to you, that's fine. See if you can help improve what the designer is trying to accomplish, not what you want to see done.



As for the design, I'd agree with the notion that it needs more contrast. A little more definite lines. Hopefully if you do that the nose ring, lip ring, fingernails, and ring won't look quite so out of place. I understand that it's difficult to show detail when the objects are such a dark color to begin with though.



Also, is that a dither effect? Don't know if a different effect would accomplish your goal, but it is sort of hard on your eyes. Maybe it's the pink though. I agree with SusanTuma about the gray.



Anyways, keep working at it! I can see this as being a prime shirt design.

yeah thanks hagnii, I´ll Try something this weekend,

some changes!!

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any help here?

i like this design its cleaver and looks reallly good on the shirt

the only thing is that i can't realy see the headphones ... at first i didn't even notice they were there .. maybe you could make them bigger ... or just stand out from the black more ...



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any other comments?

really like the halftone effect and looks like you've slimmed her down a bit as well which is good.

agree about the headphones - maybe take some of the shadow out of them so you can see their shape more easily.

have you considered highlighting this with small touches of colour or foil or something. i dunno, like paint her lips or make her nose stud gold foil or silver.

not that i don't think it looks great as it is just wondering what that would be like?

mmmmmmm Im not really sure about it...

any comment?

so far I preffer V3...for V4 you need to work more on details...;)

critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47100/My_Pre_Loved_Cup_of_Coffee

thanks!

yeah, I'm not sure about the colors..... I think I just like the way it looks on version 3

i would like to see the shirt placement, i think it has potential. maybe do it in like a sepia tone.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/47588/gloomy

and

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47597/Pick_up_the_Pieces

the placement is on version 3

i like the placement

I like V3 too. I don't like the tears.

I liked previous version better... but maybe just keeping the red in the hair would also work... I don't like the tears