the problem I think is we see a lot of pyramid designs.....it needs something to make it different.... maybe more pyramids and a chariot race weaving in and out of them.....the original street race
also folks aren't big fans of unnecessary text here.....especially logos or signatures!
Keep subbing tho....its taken me a few not right ones to get to the first sub I am happy with
I much prefer this to your v1. I think a gold sphinx on a shirt would be really good but i think it would be GREAT if you put a twist on it.
So maybe instead of a feline sphinx it was a famous cartoon cat but sphinxed up--in the style of the sphinx. (just an example, brainstorm and see what you come up with)
Whatever you decide to do, it needs to be more challenging and surprising to the viewer.
I don't have idea....
It still have 5 scoring day more but it was stop so early.....
maybe I can get advice what should i rework....
Please critique it......