My submissions has low scored...

I don't have idea....

It still have 5 scoring day more but it was stop so early.....

maybe I can get advice what should i rework....

Please critique it......

Thanks for critiquing my design!



I think the pyramid art is a little heavy but I really like the type.

thanks....

Maybe I will make the sphinx....oh yes I forgot about the words...It's my clothing brand...sorry....



u're design is awesome Brightwood....

would you help me to always critique my design?

i'm sorry for my bad english...

I mean "your design" not "u're design"

yeah, you must add an originality touch with characters or somethings.. the sphinx seems to be cool.

love the graphic.... nice typohraphy too actually... right on :D



Please vote for my design :)



http://www.threadless.com/submission/217848/Ugly_Duckling



Thx

Wow, very interesting! I would take away the rim of red on the eye. It sticks out a bit.

nice work,try to work on t eyes...

thnks for t cririque..

thanks.....

go to canvas.....:3

i found this good.. is this a glow-in-the dark design?



Please feel free to crit mine :)

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the problem I think is we see a lot of pyramid designs.....it needs something to make it different.... maybe more pyramids and a chariot race weaving in and out of them.....the original street race



also folks aren't big fans of unnecessary text here.....especially logos or signatures!



Keep subbing tho....its taken me a few not right ones to get to the first sub I am happy with



would like your opinion

I have made change my design...

Delete the text and make more element

much better

I much prefer this to your v1. I think a gold sphinx on a shirt would be really good but i think it would be GREAT if you put a twist on it.



So maybe instead of a feline sphinx it was a famous cartoon cat but sphinxed up--in the style of the sphinx. (just an example, brainstorm and see what you come up with)



Whatever you decide to do, it needs to be more challenging and surprising to the viewer.



Thanks for looking at my work.

i agree with smith the shirt isnt doing anything at the moment. i would use a cat like felix if you were gonna do something like smith did suggest

good luck with everything



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