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Also, I'm working on re-drawing the headphones. I realized that I could probably draw them out better than that, so this is a rough draft! I just thought I'd get opinions of the design in general ;]
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Nice Idea...
you could redraw the notes so that they don't look thick anymore? Can you help me on my Distance love?? |
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Hate to tell you waht I really think but i think that headphones are only marginally better than a tape. Tapes are definitely overdone. Headphones are done (especially places other than threadless) but if you can make it look really really cool then it might go over.
No idea for you really, but I agree that you need to work on the redrawing of the headphones. The notes are confusing and distracting for me. Maybe the cable can be coming forward with exxagerated perspective, so that by the time you get to "forever" it's really big and the plug points right at you. it reminds me a lot of these designs. |
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i like your idea, version 2 is definitely better than version 1, but i agree u need to work on the cable, it is quite messy and the text is not clear.
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I'd suggest thickening the headphone cord a bit more, also it could be just me, but the "is" is hard to read.
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