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v1 Silence is Boring, 1067 days ago, click to expand
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darlz
darlz on Jun 25 '09
New & improved! Comments? :]
darlz
darlz on Jun 25 '09
Also, I'm working on re-drawing the headphones. I realized that I could probably draw them out better than that, so this is a rough draft! I just thought I'd get opinions of the design in general ;]
donlope01
donlope01 on Jun 25 '09
Nice Idea...

you could redraw the notes so that they don't look thick anymore?





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Carixpig
Carixpig on Jun 25 '09
Hate to tell you waht I really think but i think that headphones are only marginally better than a tape. Tapes are definitely overdone. Headphones are done (especially places other than threadless) but if you can make it look really really cool then it might go over.



No idea for you really, but I agree that you need to work on the redrawing of the headphones. The notes are confusing and distracting for me.



Maybe the cable can be coming forward with exxagerated perspective, so that by the time you get to "forever" it's really big and the plug points right at you.



it reminds me a lot of these designs.
evan3
   evan3 on Jun 25 '09
great

now add color!

lots of it

mind a commenting?
noahpui
noahpui on Jun 25 '09
i like your idea, version 2 is definitely better than version 1, but i agree u need to work on the cable, it is quite messy and the text is not clear.



please give me comment also



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matthewdamianritchie
matthewdamianritchie on Jun 25 '09
I think this design is a little better then the original but it needs more line variety in the cord and lettering. the headphones need work as well because they look too rushed. I think the idea is good but maybe over done.
Harukio
Harukio on Jun 25 '09
I'd suggest thickening the headphone cord a bit more, also it could be just me, but the "is" is hard to read.
Ike Lawliet
Ike Lawliet on Jun 25 '09
The thickness of the cords varies when the cords are notes, but that seems a bit odd. What about making the entire cord the boldness of the notes?



Also, I notice that the design is a bit unbalanced since one headphone is almost solid, while the other has more detail. Could you remove some ink from the more solid, father away one, so it doesn't grab all of the attention? I like this drawing!



Thanks for your critiques.
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noahpui
noahpui on Jul 08 '09
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