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noahpui on Jun 22 '09
It's for Kids.
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pozda on Jun 22 '09
I thinks its finished, nice and clean!
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kluve on Jun 22 '09
very cute! i would even wear it :) haha
check out my new version of Yum! http://www.threadless.com/critique/47050/yum#v2 as well as these others: http://www.threadless.com/critique/47113/If_You_Would_Be_LOVED#v2 http://www.threadless.com/critique/46595/I_ve_Got_It_You |
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raihan42 on Jun 22 '09
Haha I was about to say this would work as a kids tee :P
Although I know some people who would wear this anyway. My first design got accepted and I'd really appreciate a vote. Thanks alot! |
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Korirok on Jun 22 '09
Awww. I could only suggest one thing... maybe adding the black seeds on a strawberry just to complete it.
Check out mine please! |
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Risdiansah on Jun 22 '09
hahha i love it. maybe work on the strawberry so it looks more nice :)
Thanks for your comment on my design :) |
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hyexz on Jun 23 '09
this looks like one i did but cuter
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JP_designer on Jun 23 '09
I Love cake too!! hehe. What about adding some shading to the strawberries and i htink the big strawberries should be flipped around so the green is at the top. I like this shirt i think its cute.
Could you vote for my design 1 Could you vote for my design 2 |
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noahpui on Jun 23 '09
It's for Kids. Which one is better?
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noahpui on Jun 23 '09
Which one is better?
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DinoeNugget on Jun 23 '09
Wow! That's amazing! :D I really love that! I would say that the 3rd one is the best because I always loves the little heart in the speech bubble ^_^ Lol. Amazing design =]
Can you comment on mine please? Match Box! Thank you! |
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Tisato on Jun 23 '09
Wow!! that's great... I prefer version 2... Maybe little bigger... Great design!!...
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SusanTuma on Jun 23 '09
So cute! I think version 2 for sure, but maybe a little lower on the shirt. Adorable When you submit, I think you should inclued a onesie, because I would LOVE that for my baby girl. Clever on the bow! I'd give it a 4 as is, and a 5 if I saw a onesie - it'd make me go 'Oh! how CUTE!"
Anyway, I have another crit up - appreciate your input? Can you hear me now? |
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carissabaker on Jun 23 '09
this is so cutee.. :P i like version 1. i think its the best out of all
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nordiq on Jun 23 '09
definitly no. 3
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SusanTuma on Jun 23 '09
Now that we've all picked a different version.....
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a wild thing on Jun 23 '09 i like the littel design behind the cake on version 3, but on the whole shirt. maybe just have the designs frame the cake and then fade out into the shirt? adorable image though! so clever with the berry bow!
please have a look at mine link text |
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noahpui on Jun 23 '09
Thx all~ do i need to add more? or just keep it simple?
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lukeymt on Jun 23 '09
ahr that art work is amazing!
although i think it needs some else not sure what but maybe even some smaller objects version two with some smaller cakes or something :S |
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Carixpig on Jun 25 '09
To help you out even more, I hate hearts in speech bubbles! V3 in a onesie is a great idea Susan. Number 1 is my choice as plain tee.
I think the upside down strrawberries are nice because they look like a cute bow. Big problem, however: you have too many colours. You can have up to 8 colours. White, black and grey are counted as colours. Try using the t-shirt pink for the cheeks and for strawberry innards. Consolidate your greys and yellows and you should be there. |
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noahpui on Jun 25 '09
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noahpui on Jun 25 '09
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Icko64 on Jun 25 '09
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robotwaste on Jun 25 '09
i like it. Nice job.
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noahpui on Jun 25 '09
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noahpui on Jun 25 '09
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noahpui on Jun 25 '09
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SusanTuma on Jun 25 '09
Hey! Great presentation -love that you included a kids and a onesie. I say submit!! I'll def give you a vote!
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DinoeNugget on Jun 25 '09
It's looking so good I could eat it all up with a spoon :D Except I eat my cake with forks =| But don't let the tee hear that, lol, sorry, I'm in a strange mood =P But this is looking fantastic! I love everything about it! Def sub =]
Is it ready to be submitted yet? What do you think? |
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noahpui on Jun 25 '09
thx~ Susan
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noahpui on Jun 26 '09
Ask for ppl opinion, is it ready to submit?
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Risdiansah on Jun 26 '09
LOVE it! Sub!
Please score my design :) http://www.threadless.com/submission/217848/Ugly_Duckling Thx |
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Ike Lawliet on Jun 26 '09
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Ruusulampi on Jun 26 '09
I think it's ready. cute desing
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sethhilton on Jun 26 '09
it's cute. :)
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clause on Jun 26 '09 cute!
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clause on Jun 26 '09 i think it's good to go man!
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spacextoaster on Jun 26 '09
cute! i love food with faces xD
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ricktuma on Jun 26 '09
This is great! Submit!
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noahpui on Jul 01 '09
It's for Kids and babies.
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rabodnube on Jul 03 '09
Itīs nice idea for babys.
The colours are really nice choosing. Just one thing, the perspective of the face..itīs rare. I donīt know if is a cake, not totally. But I like to much. Please, can you help me with my design? |
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harturo123 on Jul 03 '09
I think the face should have the same perspective as the cake's surface. Good work though, it can be a very nice designwith a bit of more work.
Could you please vote for my design |
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noahpui on Jul 08 '09
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kidloko on Jul 08 '09 Yep, sooo sweet! I wanna make babies now!
Hope you enjoy my submission too! Comments are welcome! Thnx! |
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noahpui on Jul 08 '09
This is the design process
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HeatherMichelle on Jul 08 '09
I really like it, its cute!
would you mind critiquing mine for me? http://www.threadless.com/critique/48080/Engraved_Love |
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atkt on Jul 08 '09
Aaahhh! sooo cute! would definitely work for a kids shirt Submit!
oh and if you have time could you crit mermaid |
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noahpui on Jul 09 '09
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noahpui on Jul 09 '09
Submit already
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