what happens in the head when a gum is stuck to a shoe?



i donīt know how to paint the shoes and In which placement t-shirt should be stay.

Any Help?



Itīs great to be submit?

you need more work but it is a awesome idea. is too funny and a little more work is apt to sumit.

probably you can try to draw the shoe and make it vector style. that's my point.

nice idea but you need to add some effects

help me in this

plzzz

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46924/floral_shirt

Cool idea.

You definitively has to work on it because it has some potential.

I like the idea, make it less sketchy and try it on some of the tee-models.



Oh, by the way... apparently it's not allowed to place links to your designs on already submitted designs. I just found out the hard way ;-)

I like the concept...:) but, it seems like unfinished.. may be shoes require some work... i mean some details....

i agree wiv simisir...shoe needs work...like the idea tho..

i think if u color the shoe would be better and u can also add a text for exemple what the chewingum is saying at that moment it will be good

I say google some images for reference so you get an idea of how gum stretches off the sidewalk... or experiment with your own gum and shoes ;) I think once you get that down you can start thinking about the composition =) Hope that helps! Good luck!

I think you need to emphasise the shape of the shoe.. maybe a heal? its also not very obvious that its gome. maybe do a little bit of research on that idea.




Could you vote for my design 1



Could you vote for my design 2

thanx for the comment.



i like the gum design, reminds me of that 90s skater punk style. maybe it's the neon pink haha. i think it would make the shoe just black and white, so it doesn't detract from the gum. and maybe on a grey tee?



can't wait to see v2

I agree that the shoe should just be black and white, i do think the shape of it needs some revisions, try taking a photo of one and tracing over the main lines to get the shape corrent. I would try a few different types of shoes and see which one suits the idea. I do love the gum and the colour is perfect, what are the too faint lines hanging from the left hand side of the gum i would rub these out.

haha i like the idea but i think u should work on it a bit more, id wear it! cant wait for version2! pls critique on mine:





http://www.threadless.com/critique/44375/Oriental_Face



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46975/Retro_Ladies

Needs more color around the shoe, ground, and maybe background. Looks good so far.

Well..What do you thing about the shoe?

This kind of shoes is ok?

Of course, itīs just a sketch and needs a bit work.

Nice idea. The shoe looks fine-- maybe smooth a couple of points on the sole.



I think the gum monster will come through more clearly if you only use black and white on the eyes and mouth-- use the two shades of pink to express the outline and texture of the gum.



Looking forward to the next version!



It'd be great if you could critique my design - Never mind the tigers...



And / or vote for my first submission - Tiger-Bat

tread on the sole of the shoe might be nice only in a grey tho so it doesn't overpower the gum



would also like to see the gum monster more defined and figurative



could also play with scale: less shoe....more gum monster



would like your opinion

Great with the shoe.

I think you ought to add some texture to it though, to make it more real, as well as correct some angles that look too sharp.

I see that it is just a sketch, so I guess it was what you were up to do with it, so good luck!



Can you vote on my design?

need to work on those gum lines...way to thick and wobbly