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v1 Heart Plant, 1070 days ago, click to expand
v2 Heart Plant, current version








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DinoeNugget
DinoeNugget on Jun 21 '09
Here's V2.. I've looped the shirt design around to the back of the shirt using some more vines =]



Any comments?
DinoeNugget
DinoeNugget on Jun 21 '09
Bump =]
DinoeNugget
DinoeNugget on Jun 21 '09
Can someone please comment on my shirt? =(
DinoeNugget
DinoeNugget on Jun 21 '09
Whys it so hard to get some comments?! Lol
tom griffin-sykes
tom griffin-sykes on Jun 21 '09
HELLO!!!!

yeah i think its quite cool, but perhaps abit simple at the mo...

maybe think about putting more branches on?



wot u recon to mine?
TFail
TFail on Jun 21 '09
I like the colors and the composition. I think the vines need to be perfected a little more. Because some parts of it are a little rough, but other parts are really smooth and nice... so I guess one way or the other? And perhaps the hearts should be connected to the vine all from the same place? Like all in the middle of the dip or all from the bottom of the heart. Haha.. Bottom of the heart. Anyway, yes... even out those vines and perfect them and go from there for now =D



Btw, if you get the chance could you come vote for my Zombie Squid? I'd really appreciate it =D
Risdiansah
Risdiansah on Jun 21 '09
this is nice. i like it :)



A little help with my designs please :D



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46993/Princess_and_the_Frog



And



http://www.threadless.com/critique/43381/Bully



Thx

Ars Fera
Ars Fera on Jun 21 '09
Thanks for the comment!

I think the flower could use a some more petals, to make it look like a more traditional flower. It sort of reminds me of the plant monster from Jumanji lol. I think there should be more vines that are way more intricate. If this is going to have any chance at being printed you have to make this thing stand out against all of the other designs, so do something creative or artistic to give it that wow factor!
Tian Lubis
Tian Lubis on Jun 22 '09
more flowersss...
simmisri
simmisri on Jun 22 '09
yes!!! flower need some more petals...
Creative Photos
Creative Photos on Jun 22 '09
It's a real girly tee! I agree with the above, the line work can be smoother!



Please rate mine:

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xbrokendreamsx
xbrokendreamsx on Jun 23 '09
I agree with the above, smoother lines and more flowers.. maybe in various sizes?
simcha123456
simcha123456 on Jun 24 '09
love!
JP_designer
JP_designer on Jun 24 '09
Im not sure if its shirt worthy. its a great illustration though
MonAme
MonAme on Jun 25 '09
i really like ur shirt u shud submit it. I am new to this and i need comments on my designs as well, ill be uploading more today and I would appreciate your opinion
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Soumitro
Soumitro on Jul 02 '09
Nice but i think try some more placement. Good work

pick ur expression plz

Run..Run..Run..
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rabodnube
rabodnube on Jul 06 '09
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