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This is my first submission, do u have any comment?
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Hilarious! I like them a lot! My only thing to say would be that it might add a lot to have them all interacting, and have some sort of chain reaction. Not sure what, but it would add some more appeal.
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Ivantobealone on Jun 19 '09 Very cute!! Are the three large ones close ups of the ones above or part of the design? I also agree that they should be doing something or perhaps have the shape of the overall design be a circle
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Those three large characters are not included. They are the models wearing that t-shirt.
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Yeah, i think this will print. But it might need a bit more concept to be really popular, like Susan said. It is similar to this printed design by Aled Lewis: Eating Brains, Throwing Shapes
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a wild thing on Jun 20 '09 |
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Honestly the bad models are gonna hurt your score. I'd make the presentation better before submitting. Design-wise it's almost there, like someone else said the visual appeal is there, it just needs to mean a little something, whether that be a chain or more interaction or even a story!!
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some cute little guys, but I'd try to go with some bigger concept that ties them together. As it is, they're just standing or sitting in different poses, but if they were doing specific dance moves or acting out professions, it'd be less random. All that said, looks like a good start!
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Thx~all, i will work on it again.
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Love it! i wanna see the placement on a real tee thou :)
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Whats the placement like? Have you played with shirt colours??? I think this is awesome! Submit it soon!
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this is really nice... great concept!!
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i will delete some characters....
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