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NOMNOM. on Jun 17 '09
opinions?
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bygrinstow on Jun 17 '09
you need your own characters, not someone else's
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NOMNOM. on Jun 17 '09
yeah
i just thought id be a kinda cool shirt.. idk even know if its allowed? is there some kind of copy right thing that would prevent this? |
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awesome illustration style! ..i like it! i just don't know much about the copy right thing! good luck man! :D
but my clown design just approved! haha! kindly visit mine! :)) |
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bygrinstow on Jun 17 '09
yes
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bygrinstow on Jun 17 '09
on the copyright thing
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WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 17 '09
Yeah, characters in comics, tv, movies, books, ect are copyrighted.
The only way to get around that sort of thing is parody. Which this isn't. |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 17 '09
awww
thats lameee woulda been a pretty cool shirt.. wellll back to the drawing boardd haha lol |
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bygrinstow on Jun 17 '09
send it to DC
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NOMNOM. on Jun 17 '09
ohh
good ideaa thanks:] |
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tom griffin-sykes on Jun 17 '09
yeah nice style
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tom griffin-sykes on Jun 17 '09
http://www.threadless.com/critique/46753/Odd_sOckS
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NOMNOM. on Jun 17 '09
not going to submit due to some copyright issues..
lol but i just wannted to see what id look like on a shirt. to bad i cant, cause i think it looks pretty cool eh? haha |
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JanDeA on Jun 17 '09
Very cool I wish you could submit it. Maybe show it to Marvel or who ever does their work. Wow!!
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boyojohnquinn on Jun 17 '09
Surely they can't copyright the idea of a bad clown? if you call it something else. I mean it could be IT or any clown?!
Check Out Mine |
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boyojohnquinn on Jun 17 '09
Sorry sHere it is
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
thats truuee..
idkk you think if i re name it it'll just be some other clown? its not necessarily sayingg its the joker at all right? and everyones just gonna tell me its unoriginal and to make my own characters eh..? idk lol |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
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raihan42 on Jun 18 '09
Y'know I honestly you should at least try and see if you can get away with it. I don't see any green hair or purple attire so why not?
It's pretty rad. I'd give it a shot. |
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raihan42 on Jun 18 '09
Oh just one thing. It looks like one eye is considerably lower than the other. Just thought I'd point it out, not sure if it was intentional :P
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
hahaha
yeahh its kind of a winking motion i guess? lol |
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raihan42 on Jun 18 '09
Haha alright. What's the blue bit?
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Braniel on Jun 18 '09
ya man go for it, you made this by yourself 100% they can't get you for copyright if you didn't copy it, and besides threadless won't except it if it's illegal. so sub that baby up right now.
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GonzoLou on Jun 18 '09
dunno the legalities.... but surely joker inspired is ok, as others have said u haven't copied it... to me it looks as tho the joker was the inspiration.
...and the joker isn't the only crazy grinning dude out there! |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
haha
well from most of the feedback i've gotten i think im gonna actually sub this.. but is there a way to re name it? or do i have to re upload this then do it? cause i dont want to have anything to do with joker on it lol thanks for all the feedback! oh and raihan42: that was his hair XD the rest is just cut off by the shirt |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
okay
here it is touched up and contrasted a little to get rid of the fade kinda look, and i couldnt think of anything else to do with that top right corner.. i tried making it just straight up.. but that just looked weirdd.. let me know what you think of it.. any ideas suggestions? |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
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Dobrichina on Jun 18 '09
I'd get rid of the blue smudge on the shoulder, it doesn't add up with the rest.
Otherwise, I think it's great. I know some people that would definitely wear this. Nice work. |
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Fabiu on Jun 18 '09
very nice work...
perhaps I would have shown the other eye... |
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Devonaire on Jun 18 '09
Great job. I like it with just the one eye. It adds to thee creepiness.
Thanks for critiquing mine |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
Dobrichina:
do you think if i just made the blue smudge black and white it would kinda fit it? or if i bring the entire drawing down and fit in the hair as well? thanks for the input fabiu and devonaire |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
okayy
so im trying to compensate for that blue smudge so i shrunk it down a little and added more hair to the left side to try to make it fit.. does it work? |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
woopsss
forgot to erase through the collar re uploading.. |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
The Jokerrr
im thinking a large print going across the entire tee.. what do you think? |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
ommgg
forget that comment it automatically put it in for some reason? but im trying to compensate for that blue smudge so i shrunk it down a little and added more hair to the left side to try to make it fit.. does it work? |
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TFail on Jun 18 '09
Have you tried putting it up on a black tee instead? That way you'd only have to worry about filling in the white for his face and not really making a solid outline of the rest of him and trying to blend things in. Just the white face and some blue for the hair ;) I say at least try it. You'll see what I mean =D
Oh and btw, my Zombie Squid is up for voting if you'd care to give it your vote ;) Cheers! |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
yeahh
i wanted to do it on black at first.. but could nott find a way to make it work:/ the black just fills every little hole and takes away the outline of the face.. idk i wanted it on black though.. maybe i just suck at photoshop? haha |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
so is it better with the other hair coming in?
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
does anyone know if theres a way i can re name this?
or do i have to re sub it? i dont want it to be affiliated with the joker.. |
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Dobrichina on Jun 18 '09
It's better with the blue on the other shoulder, but I still think it would be better blank on both shoulders, would be much fresher.
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justinweidling on Jun 18 '09
looks good, i like it on the white t-shirt
please check out mine I would love to here what you think |
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Braniel on Jun 18 '09
looks better now, nice!
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
dobrichina
i will make a version with no blue on both shoulders and post it for comparison. thanks for the input. and that you justinweilding and Braniel i'll check out yourss! |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
okay heres a comparison from two versions i've been getting requests for
first one has no blue [hair] on the shoulders the second one does wich do you like better? and do you have any more suggestions? |
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justinweidling on Jun 18 '09
I like it with the blue, especially the way you used the blue
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TeeChee on Jun 18 '09
I like it without the blue on the collar. Looks cool, Nice design.
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
thankss
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raihan42 on Jun 18 '09
I like the blue on both shoulders. Great background too haha :P
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tom griffin-sykes on Jun 18 '09
that seems to have realy come together as a t.
i wasnt too sure wen i saw the pic but that full coverage is cool. wots goin on on the back? might be a lil bold a contrast. interested to kno wot u think |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
tom griffin-sykes:
what do you mean the back? the back of the tee? or the background its on? and contrast on what? |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
Thankyou for your input
raihan42 and tom griffin-sykes! ill check yours out |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
anybody know if i can rename this?
or do i have to re submit it? |
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Admiral Pants on Jun 18 '09
Good drawing, but it's copyright infringement, they can't print it...
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
yeah we discussed that on version one..
if i rename it and dont put anything with joker on it it really has no affiliation with it.. it could be just some other crazy clown looking person.. lol thanks for you input though:] |
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Risdiansah on Jun 18 '09
i like the top one, it looks more simple but still clear :) ... Cool design!
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raihan42 on Jun 18 '09
I think you should submit the bottom one with the name "Looks To Die For"
:D |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
haha
thats a good idea! i think i just mightt do that:D thankss lol |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
Okay heres a final draft for sub.
This version seemed to be the most popular.. Any more suggestionss? Do you think its ready to submit? |
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Braniel on Jun 18 '09
Ah yeah, it's lookin man lookin good!Nice presentation. It looks pretty ready to me. Nice job!
If you could score my first design that would be awesome, thanks man! |
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Braniel on Jun 18 '09
I mean "my first submission."thanks.
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raihan42 on Jun 18 '09
Looks good man. Great work.
So how are you gonna do this? New name and just straight to submit? Btw nice shirt template. Where'd you get it? |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 18 '09
yeahh
thats what im thinkingg.. and i dont see how they can call it copyright if i do that? well i'll just hope for the bestt lol i got it from the threadless flickr thing, just go to google and type in "threadless blank tee flickr" it should pop upp |
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xcarnoxometzx on Jun 18 '09
I would def buy it as is, but...... yeah the copyright thing is what Im concerned about. Looks great though
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xcarnoxometzx on Jun 18 '09
Oh an a question, is there a type of effect that you used to get the colors on there? If so, what?
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
thankyou,
and noo.. it was all colored in on paper, and just darkened and tweaked with contrast and stuff on photoshop thanks for your input! |
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WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 19 '09
I think with that smile it's still very identifiable as the Joker.
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this is an amazing style and unique rendering of one of the most awesome characters ever!!! if you can get away without any copyright issues, all the best!
please comment on mine link text |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
yeahh
im just worried they'll just figure its the joker and say its copyright.. and yeah its the smile that pretty much gives it away.. hopefully i dont get called on it XD lol thanks for the input |
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JP_designer on Jun 19 '09
I think a little bit of a hint of an eye for the right eye would help out your design. it seems too dark there and makes him a little more like two face than joker haha. well done though.
thanks for the comment. |
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rabodnube on Jun 19 '09
Hi NoMNoM!!!
Your design....is BRILLIANT to be sumbit. Thanks for the help. I made some changes that you suggested me. You think the shirt is ready to be submit or needs work? http://www.threadless.com/critique/46700/Love_in_sale#v4 |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
Hey thanks for the advice Jp designer,
yeahh im trying to make it look a little less like joker cause of copyright.. haha i need to rename it too so i dont get called on that.. lol Thanks rabodnube i'll go check out your new version:] |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
is this ready for sub?
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raihan42 on Jun 19 '09
yep, just rename to avoid those issues
My guitar hero one got rejected : bummer... |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
yeah,
alright i think im gonna submit this.. and just hope for the best! lol whatt? whyyy? theres no copyright thing on that is there!? |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
Oh btw,
should i delete this critique and re upload it with a different name since its titled as the joker? for copyright and stuff? please let me know thankyou |
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raihan42 on Jun 19 '09
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raihan42 on Jun 19 '09
Oh and I attempted to explain the flash template thing over on my guitar hero design thinger.
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
Okay heres my first flash test,
hopefully its working good? lol |
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
okayyy
looks good to me? anybody see anything wrong? |
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raihan42 on Jun 19 '09
Looks good. Good luck.
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NOMNOM. on Jun 19 '09
thanks man
submitting now, |
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Risdiansah on Jun 19 '09
i think it's ready :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/45855/Ugly_Duckling#v6 http://www.threadless.com/critique/43381/Bully Thx |
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rabodnube on Jul 03 '09
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NOMNOM. on Jul 13 '09
Yeah i subbed it a while ago,
but it got denied cause of copyright issues:/ |
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Gergeosson on Jul 20 '09
That's too bad :( I would definitely buy it!
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Gergeosson on Jul 20 '09
You know what? Threadless should definitely check with DC Comics regarding the copyright issue. Or you should just do it yourself! It wouldn't hurt trying...
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hadjisman on Jul 20 '09
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JanDeA on Jul 20 '09
Looks good submit it
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xcarnoxometzx on Jul 20 '09
Sucks that Threadless didnt approve this design for voting
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Mil_Mil on Jul 21 '09
this shit is down!!!!!!!!
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Mil_Mil on Jul 21 '09
this shit is down!!!!!!!! itz dope bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ill buy diz shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! : )
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im thinking a large print going across the entire tee..
what do you think?