Cause...sometimes Love is in SALE.



This tee is dedicated to Tijeretaīs Girl.

it is nice. is sweet...

I love this idea and the blue one is great.

I would change the big heart orientation so that it does not seem to keep that position on its own...don't know if I'm clear...make it rest on the trolley side. (sorry for my english ;) )



Can you help me on my design?

Poseidons arm

I prefer the blue one but the red ones cool too. Only thing with the blue one would be to put the text "sale" in white. Also watch out for the smoothness of your heart. on the left hand side of it there is a slight dink if you like. it needs to be smoothed out.



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i like the blue one better because it blend with the shirt,i thnk u should tilt the love a little bit

i kind of think there should be stuff in the cart with it to make it seem more mundane, but i also like it how it is. did you try it with other stuff in the cart?

I think is great, I like the blue one better. Maybe if one side of the heart touches the handle of the cart, I think it would look better.

i like both colours, but think the red one should have pinks, instead of yellow and orange on the price sticker, same as how youve done with the blue, and yeah agree with above about leaning the heart on the trolley.

very nice

nice both the design tilt the heart little bit on either side



please take a look at mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46664/Responsibility

Love the blue one! think the colour pallet is amazing!

realy like this, wicked!



wot u think of mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46753/Odd_sOckS

Ok..thanks a lot..Iīll do it.

Gimme a couple of minutes!

Well..this is the 2nd version of Love in sale..

Sale word is white now.

Heart have been moving...just a little up to the hand trolier.

And finally : colours Blues... Iīm agree is much better than the other in red.



Thanks a lot to everyone for the help!!!

Gimme me your opinion to be submit, please..

the heart seems crooked on te left side.. n mayb u cud put a bit of light n shadow on the heart, to make it look more 3d like the cart

i realy like it.. its so ironic ;)

crooked on te left side is true and I think is perfect to be armony with the rest.

Well... 3rd version.

With a little detail in handcarry as recommendations.

looking sweeeeet, submit!

now you get it.

the love shape is a little bit edgy isn't? but overall looking great

Real nice! But the heart shape can be smoother.



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Visit to earth

Looks Great! Well done Submit!

cool!

heart shape an type are bad

great...just the heart needs bit of work...and the submit:-))



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My favorite toy

yea i saw the first version ... the placement and the 'fit' of the heart is perfect now... like this ... how about you give the heart a more 3d effect ...

sweet idea!

tweak on the type maybe...

I think outside of rounding the heart, it's all set.

The only other thing I could suggest is maybe some sort of grounding for the cart? like a shadow.

are u sure about the colors?

the white disapears on the cyan shirt..



u should fix the heart shape too..

i like the red version alot better

and i agree with making the heart a little smoother..



but great design!



Please check out my design

great idea, it looks awesome, submit!



please check out my design, i would appreciate the feedback

Thanks for the comment!

I agree, everything is perfect except for the heart. Smooth it out and you are good to go!

A little bend in the sale sticker would help to give the heart more of a 3D suggestion about it, and a red and yellow colour scheme on the sticker would help to to hit you more in the eye and notice it (like they do for sales)

Nice design, but... smooth out the heart and integrate it more into the 3D shopping trolley.

well done! simple but interesting.. summit this!

Looks better but still watch out for the left side of your heart, it needs smoothing out because at the moment its pointy. if your using illustrator just pull the tabs and play with them till its smooth. i get this problem a lot too so don't worry.



thanks for the comment.

Thanks a lot to everybody for your help me.



New version.

Smooth the heartīs lines and I put a bluelight line to be more smooth to.

Change typo line.



And some line of movement in the air from wheels.



I donīt know if I can submit with this new version.

Whatīs do you think about it?

It could still use a bit more smoothing out, maybe curve the bottom of the heart and make the lighter line on the heart the edge of the heart. otherwise submit it

I don't think that the bluelight line works.

I would have put the thicker part of it on the left side.

Apart from that, you can submit it.



Can you help me on my design?

Poseidon's arm

good, very good, but i think details need more accuracy

i still think the heart should be reddd:]



it just seems a little dull with all the blue..



looks alot better though with the edges,



good work!

i still think the heart should be reddd:]



it just seems a little dull with all the blue..



looks alot better though with the edges,



good work!

Red heart like NOMNOM īs recomendations.



Red or BLUE?



Thanks you !!!

blue one, thousands miles...

i like red one)

red one is more contrast with the tee

great:-) heart has a good shape now and Im going for the blue version as well. thanks for comments on mine. good luck:-)

I like the blue one. I think it's ready.

The blue heart is more in harmony with the blue tee. And the shape is much better. Submit the blue one!

Id say your ready now... i prefer the blue too...

Thanks for the comment!

Why not submit them both? The presentation could be the exact same! You could show everyone both of the color options. And plenty of submissions give color options, and the comments on the submission entry will decide which color scheme Threadless will choose.

Nice cleanup on the heart by the way!

And if you decide to choose the red one, I would change the color of the blue shine at the top of the heart, maybe make it white or orange

Very nice!! I prefer the blue version!!...

much better type. decent highlights.

"heart in a cart" eh...

I like the blue one.



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i kind of like it better without the highlight on top

i like it better without the highlight

i say present them both as well. might as well! and im not sure if i like the cart going so fast...



could you look at mine?

i love t red one,blue on blue doesnt go on well,red highlights t shirt...all t best..

really like it.. nice composition for your trolly.!

This is really cute!

I think if you're going with blue, you should have a different coloured t-shirt; the blue design gets hidden by the blue t-shirt.

But if you want to keep that blue t-shirt, I say go with red. :)

Thanks to every ones at moments is submit to score.

Itīs just waiting.

Blue!

cute, my vote is for red!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45162/Dream_Catcher

Man this is a tough call! Honest to god maybe the red just contrasts with me too much so I'm leaning with the blue. Both are great though, it's true you could represent both.

I like the overall idea, but it kinda looks like it could be a valentine's chocolate heart and not love heart



Though I could just be reading it like that

something to think about

the blue one is the best nice done

critique mine

the colours set it off better :)

The simple palette of the blue is really nice, but there seems to be lots of support for the red heart - so maybe you could have a red heart on a pink tee?

I like it!

Its ready. THis is super awesome . seriously submit this now. YOu've deffs got my vote on it.




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just voted!!!



would appreciate your feedback

i liked the red one when it was on navy a lot, the blue looks nice but does not have the same impact.

awww. thats really cute. like the red heart.