Hey! what do you think?

I have no idea what any of this means, but it is visually stimulating - it's wonderful. As long as it is original work and has some rhyme or reason, I think it's wonderful. Additionally, I like the minimalist feel, although this could be incredible if it were colored in all primary / highlighter colors against white.



Check mine if you get a sec?

IMAGINATION

the text says "look on the back for explanation" theres a list on the back in japanese with explainations corresponding to the numbers

anyone else?

this is a fantastic isometric drawing. i also really like the naked guy labeled next to the shower, nice touch. i think a small amount of color could help, maybe only highlighting key elements. as for the japanese lettering. im not saying its a bad choice but i cant imagine it fairing well in the voting on a predominately english speaking site because we will just feel lost. any ideas of how to ramify that?



if you can take a look at mine and be harsh?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46578/On_the_Lamb

I love japanese characters - but i have to agree that it would be lost on a lot of voters - and it would be a real shame to lose votes for that on this cool design! I could look at it for hours.



please check mine? purple_dream

wow....this is so awesome and I would love to have it on a shirt! it's so imaginative and interesting, it needs to print when your done. Just show us the shirt placement.

and if you could check out my design it would be greatly appreciated!

if tere is an explanation on t back,ten its cool...

this is seriously one of the coolest designs I've seen on this site by the way,... so cool.

red

Im not sure about it being in red. The black i think looked better. what about blue? whats the placement look like and what colours for shirts?



Could you take a look at my design please?

Really like this. I would like to see placement and colour ideas though. I imagine it on a dark blue, for some reason. Pretty close to sub, I reckon!



check mine out please? http://www.threadless.com/critique/46677/L_homme_du_velo

I preferred it all black and white

I prefer the red solution... I'de like to see details...

I like the red more as well, gives a little more visual interest. I'm still waiting on more explanation, like: Is there going to be a legend? How will it be placed on a shirt? Will the elements have color, shading, or be as is?

blue

Blue works!

looks awesome, like a blue print. I will 5 this.

You cannot add a legend?

yep it will be on the back, I haven't got around to making a flash file to show yet, will upload that soon

that is fockin wicked mate. that musted hav tacken ages!!!

i love it.

o and im not too clued up on threadless icon, so, wot does that chrest mean? the one by ur name



interested to kno wot u think

The crest means that he's a printed designer.

I wolud add a drop of color somewhere, like orange or something...great design

underlinedcritic mine pls

New title: Lost is Translation

The design is inspired by old Japanese instruction manuals that speak in profound broken english. The legend is on the back of the t-shirt, I translated the words into japanese and back into english a few times using Babel fish. I will post the labels as soon as photoshop opens grrr, slow computer...

awesome work here man!

1. Place of godhood conversion

2. It is the direction of the wind

3. Window of the north

4. The window classified by north

5. Principal smokestack

6. Door who makes arch shape

7. Medium-sized window

8. The point where the roof is high

9. Being comfortable, the old mattress

10. Side ventilating sash

11. Cubicle of shower

12. Westward window

13. Computer chair for good attitude

14. the teenager who Internet the surf has been done

15. The luxurious new computer

16. Computer tower

17. Eve of the roof where the tip becomes pointed

18. bed frame which includes the slat

19. The window of the opposite which it is difficult to solve

20. Fortunate window

21. The window where luck is bad

22. The person who does not have the soap

23. Image of frame

24. The girl is the sofa

25. The fireplace which you opened

26. Remarkable oven

27. China cabinet for glasses and saucers

28. It covers the step of the main entrance from the rain

29. The place where the book is put in place

30. Dining room chair

31. General window

32. Sash of small wood

33. Edition of glass

34. The clear material which you can foresee

35. The girl boring the show of her taste

36. It is large the comfortable arm chair

37. Television

38. Entryway

39. Family piano

40. Place, where the family eats those which complain

41. Honey is house!

42. The sure balcony

43. Magnificent upward stairway

44. Pleasant sofa

45. Criticism of door

46. Cooling system door

47. Secondary portal

48. At outside most sashes

49. Large box of red pepper

50. Furthermore another window

51. Seven fragments of glass

52. Division of window

53. The door with your automobile face

54. Tired of the car

55. Short box

56. The advanced arch was pressed from the door

57. The smoke which does not have the fire

58. Rooster which calls

It looks ready to submit!

If you could score my first submission that would be great:).

How did you draw this by the way? It's so awesome! It's got my 5 for sure!

cool thanks braniel, I will.

This is super cool submit! 5$ from me



if you get a moment Joelnz

Mythical Beast

wow, i cant imagine the work put into this....its looks brilliant!

sub immediately!



please comment on mine link text

subbed

Very well done, submit! Was this for something originally? I like how if you look long enough, you notice the naked shower dude.



If you don't mind, can you look at mine too?

how may hours did this take to draw?? looks awesome, looking forward to scoring it. well done!

finally.This is one of those designs you KNOW will print no matter what.

The legend is legendarily funny! I'm so looking forward to voting on this!

Whoa! Good Luck! ;)

you have my future 5

thanks guys :)

Wow, it's so cool and complicated!) great!



can you look at mine too?

WOW. I was sold before but now I'm super sold... I LOVE the color changes, and think the legend adds SO much that I certainly wasn't expecting! I would seriously buy this RIGHT NOW. SUB.

It's great!



Check Out Mine

cool its subbed now

It's a very good design...I'll make sure to give it a 5$