Sim process on charcoal grey tee.

oops it's a bit pixelly! may need to sub again after comments...

anyone?

this could work on purple...!

OK is anyone awake?

Nice design, I like the line work and all the details are awesome, great colors I'd like to see it on a shirt. maybe make those bottom swirlies brighter.

just trying a higher res image

still a bit pixelly - does anyone have any tips on which file format works better

png-24 generally gives crisp images.



Love the colors.

I like it! Great work.

Lovely colours T-lou!



Perhaps give the ducks getting a ride more personality?

Png24 works nicely. Also rasterize your image before saving it.

made decoy duck slightly larger - still having issues with linework resolution!

yay!

actually, I was thinking of placing it on the tee so the water ran off at sides and wasn't as deep. It's hard to show tee and large detail at same time!

*wishes she had flash*

bump

Nice, you got something going here.

But the squares and the crosshair (aim thingy) on the top doesnt fit in. Everything else is rounded and and "flowing", so it looks out of place.

really nice. love the water. not sure about the spikes on the duck's back though

Im not sure about the big ducks eye. What about different coloured shirts and what does the placement look like? Its pretty much ready for submission though!!



check out my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46516/Fork_style

thanks for comments!

I love the contrasting textures, not a huge fan of the spiky thingies.

i really like your crazy style. Maybe lose the target-eye thing, it's a bit agressive/out of place

i know what people mean about losing the target, but it makes me think of one of those duck shoots that you get at fairs. dunno if this was your intent.

This is super fun! I agree with others that the target eye and spikes don't seem to fit with the rest of the sort of free flowing design, so maybe give us a look with those things turned off... I'm anxious to see on a shirt with your idea of the water running off the sides!!

hmm...i was trying to convey that it was a "killer decoy" to protect the other ducks - maybe that idea is a bit lost? The spikes and eye target are supposed to be offputting to duck hunters... well may need to rethink this!

bump for more input?

I love the colours on the dark. Not a fan of the spikes on the duck, however I do like the target eye.



Tickle-Me-Zebra

Maybe put a reflection of a sort in the water under the duck?



Could you also check out mine? It's Castles of Sand V8.



Thanks!

Watchout for gradients aswell



Would you mind taking a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46516/Fork_style

Can they not print gradients in simulated process @ TL? I have used them before on other printed Tee designs without trouble.

Hmm just checked blogs and it appears they can in Sim process here!

I have only used the same 3 colours in the gradients so should def be within 8 col limit!

Have taken out the spikes on the back - comments?

Yes, this is looking much more natural without the spikes... how about you show us your idea for placement so we can see how it integrates with the shirt? :)

cool! OK :)

Nice illustration. This is great with the orange red screaming danger (i'm personally a stickler for blue). I can't personally think of much wrong with it but i think it stil needs work.

Nice lines! I think that there should be some flow to the water part. It looks a little flat. Just my opinion!

orange bump quack

lovely Lou.....time to put it on a shirt

oh and can you crit mine please

www.threadless.com/critique/47210/pre_growth

Far better without the spikes!

Did you try to continue the pattern that is next to the duck head until its tail??

Great design like that thought!



Can you please vote for my design?

I think this is great, ready to go!

agree with kim, u should put it on a shirt



can u pls check mine out?

I really like this. What are you think as far as placement goes? Also, have you considered having the BIG duck illustrated with all the same type of shape? Rather than mixing circles, and rectangles and the swirls, maybe just do the whole body in the swirls. Just a thought.



Looks awesome though.



If you have a chance I'd love some feedback on the following.

In The Weeds

& maybe a vote for

Someone Loved Them Once



Thanks

This is a really nice piece. The only thing that feels out of place aesthetically is the eye on the mam duck, the severity of the cross in it doesn't feel cohesive with the rest. Other than that really lovely work.



If you get a chance would you score my design? Its called Worlding Another

thx for comments!

Ooops..I have been neglecting this one :(

I have been off working on another 2 subs...but will get onto this one soon!

could you crit my design please:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47523/Dandilion_Snatcher





I like the idea. Could you loose the squares in the ducks head and body? I like theidea of the whole thing flowing and with those hard edges it struggles a bit. It would be funky if the whole illustration was made up of curvy shapes. I agree, the water should look like its flowing or just have more shape, rather than a block.



Nice work!

almost there :) just the color contrast :D

really really cute!



but what's up with the bigger duck's head? if it could have the same pattern as the rest it would look less out of place.

Thanks guys for your comments.



have subbed revised version for Kids contest here:

actual LINK HERE:

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I love this design