Ok so this is just a first draft of a design I am working on. It's essentially a garbage burger...lol. I'm trying to figure out what style I should do it in. I need to go beyond the 8 color mark, because I'm just not sure how I would excecute in those constraints.



All ideas are appreciated!



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looks cool. the halftones seem out of place tho

I'm not sure what method I should use to color it :(

hmmm... I honestly do not like the halftones. In terms of colouring, go with everything else you have so far. You can either use this colour scheme on a white shirt to be striking, or try to blend them a bit into a paticular hue to fit another colour. Personally, I'd go with the white. it's a cute idea, and i think the execution is great so far, minus the halftones of course. Cut them out and I'll try to come have another look.

Freckle,



Interesting piece! I like it, but i feel the orange draws way to much attention. I think the design needs something else to bring the viewer in, like maybe an alley cat? Something odd could lift it. Love the colouring style (paint?), but i agree with agrimony - the halftone looks out of place.



Thanks for giving feedback on my piece, Castles in the Sand. The wave looks like fingers because it's supposed to look like that! :) I've uploaded a new version. Maybe it will look more to your liking now?

Ok so of course there are alot of changes here. I want the design to have that old school glittery shirt type of feel. I think it looks great on black, but could also go on cream, yellow, and light blue, maybe green.



Let me know what you guys think!

This is a great improvement, especially on the coloring. I think the black looks good, but maybe try other dark colors.

wow, this is funny, and I looked at the first one...massive improvement. It comes across a bit flat...but it depends on what you want. Flat is definitely not bad. Also the placement is spot on

Bumpity bump

any chance we can see what it looks like without the outline of brown? not sure if it makes it pop more or less to have it.

Yeah the outline of brown kind of makes it look like its in a wrapper right now.

Savick, I agree with the wrapper. It looks like a clear wrapper is around it. The texture on the brown outline I think is too much too. Maybe get rid of the brown outline all together, see how that looks? How about a green shirt, like a kelly green. I like the design though, nice work :)

the texture's an improvement, but it looks like a sticker slapped on a shirt. better without the outline.

i would say without the brown wrap bit and white dots , but id also say give it eyes lol :P

It is suppose to have a sticker feel. It is modeled after those 1970's iron on glitter shirts. :-/

I like it alot. The sticker feel works for me.

Thanks for critting my shirt.

I think yours is ready to be submitted. Good job. :)

I like this. Id like to see it with the the outline.

I seem to be the only one who liked the original version of your design a lot better, I even really liked the half tones. I think the dark colors and glitter texture on the new version take away from your awesome original design; I feel like a lot of your details are now lost. With the new colors I think it looks more like a regular cheeseburger than what you originally intended; therefore, I am (honestly) curious if others just like the idea of a giant cheeseburger better than a garbage burger.



P.S. your original design kind of makes me want to eat garbage, haha.

not diggin the texture you have over it

yah and no outline

mind lookin at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46472/Aww_Shit

On different colors

i like the yellow

but im not sure about the outline

maybe have it fade

or just drop it all together

I like the beige one. I agree, it shouldn't have an outline, maybe sunbursts!



quick google search got me this:

http://psdfan.com/freebies/freebies-high-res-sunbursts-free-download/

Nice shirt colors. I think I'd agree to lose the outline, or make it something more distinct from the graphic's colors. The outline now just looks like a mustard stain behind the sandwich, so maybe just black would look better.



Overall it's a really great illustration, and it makes me un-hungry!

I removed the boarder, however I still want the burger to be glittery. I know Threadless has a glitter texture or something right? How does it work on green?



Thanks guys!

At first I was weirded out by that odd texture, but... GLITTER?! I want that so bad right now. How do you do that? I'm guessing there's some weird protocol for it, but idk.



As far as color, I have to say light blue and cream are my favorite. I'm not sure green works for me, but it's possible I am in the minority on that one.



Check mine!

IMAGINATION

damn i loved it on all the colors you had it on! lol

Great art work!!! nice job!!!!

Thanks Matthew! Yes glitter! I want it to have that 1970's shirt feel. :) I will check out yours.

I like it on the cream shirt. Great illustration.



Tickle-Me-Zebra

what kind on glittery? all ver or just on some?

@ the loose seal



All over! The whole image.

i want one please with soft drink :p ... Submit !



Please see my design and tell me what you think :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/45855/Ugly_Duckling



Thx

nice:) i like the candy canes and the fish, lol, cool!



be so kind, check out mine?

dreaming

if your going to go glitter why not go with some more saturated neon colours - add some bright pinks and yellows etc -



love the design !!, comp, but not the green shirt - simple black or white for me.



cheers



Zombie w' tie

Freckle, whatever you did, it's working! This burger looks surprisingly tasty.... Brilliant on green. I think it's ready for submission. Really attractive.



Could you maybe also critique mine? It's Castles of Sand V8.



Oh, also, if you haven't yet, i'd love a vote/ comment on my submission Psychedelic Soup.



Tell your friends :P



Thanks!

HAha cool idea!

I'm digging the green back ground would love to see it in cream or a light blue like matthew suggested.

this is cool...I love most the version on the black tee..thats awsome



if u have a minute,please comment mine

My favorite toy

Bump

I added some shirt colors :)

Mega Burger has been submitted for approval! Thanks to all for your very insightful critiques :)