Just wanted peoples thoughts on this?

Was going to put some halftone shading in the face but didnt want to go overboard on the halftone.

And does the goatee look alright?

Thanks in advance for any comments! :)

bump

You know that with the Village people look and rainbow afro that this will have an automatic homosexual pride association? Not saying it's bad, but maybe not your intention.

shit - I didnt think of that! Does it really look gay? Coz if it does I gotta change it! Not that I dont' like gay people - I just wanted to do a guy with rainbow hair and it didnt even occur to me that it would look gay. thanks for the heads up :)

I looks like a great idea and I like the amount of half tone. The afro does not look like it is attached to the head. It looks more like a halo. Maybe if you pulled a small amt. of the afro over the outline of the head it would look more attached . I like it.

Check my work out?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46098/Ninja_on_board_in_Yellow#v5

thanks JanDeA I have to agree with you - his head does look a bit floaty - I will need to change that - thanks for the suggestions.

so what if I take the glasses away and make it a girl, and fix the afro so it looks more attached to the head?

sick, sort of an Erykah Badu thing

nice idea

yeah kinda! I'm thinkin of droppin the rainbow concept completely and doing somethin different with the afro hair idea...

Maybe I'm the only one, I don't know. That was my first impression.

Like it, but I feel like the rainbow afro is not workin. Maybe if he had a normal afro and rainbow was surrounding the entire image...ya know? Like the image is glowing rainbow. It does feel homosexual.



Please crit mine when you get a chance!

thanks guys - yeah I think I need to rework this quite a bit. :)

Love the halftones.

Maybe just like 3 or 4 colors that arent so rainbowy.

And I feel it would look nice on a darker shirt.

Check out mine?

thanks Amundaz!

Yeah gonna redo it.

i agree a darker shirt would be great!

like the design! nice job!



what you think of mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46178/MicroHEART

why dont halftone the face too? for dont cut so drastic betwen hair and face.

here is my submition please take a minute and score it

I think the color halftone is overused on this site. try just shading. or something. your hair doen't fit in with your vectorized face.





Could you check out my design please?

It's cool, like your Foxy Lady, and also the Golf Fro.

nice idea!!! i like it

im up for scoring, could u please