Just an idea now

She's pretty and not going anywhere like the flowers

Fiddling with it more later

More fiddling around

Don't like the colors at all

or the lack of depth



and all the outlines are hideous xD

I might over do the flowers more and add some huge ones



Any thoughts with a background?

You don't neccessarily need a back ground, just a different color shirt to put it on. If you do the things you said, add more details then it should work.

Crit me please?



MEGA BURGER

I think the light blue would give it a natural sky-like background. I agree that the outlining is way too heavy - I liked the look of it in v1. Also, I'm not sure if I understand the dirt underneath. Are those ants?



It might be that just more flowers extending out on each side is the way to go - not necessarily bigger ones.



I love the petals all over the place. Very pretty.



Check mine if you get a sec -

IMAGINATION

Changed the colors, and got ride of the root mess

I wasn't working really well at all



Anywho, Still going to add some light blue highlights on the dress and flowers and probably try and fiddle with the outlines, they still are bothering me a bit



any other thoughts be cool

~thanks

alright

now it looks really nice

Now to just find out how to make a flash presentation for it so it's on a shirt



I don't think I need more feedback at this point but if you have any that be cool

So I think I have flash figured out for my purposes here

That you inter next blogs :D



Gonna clean up the image more

and make her less ambiguous since I do that a lot

it's the shoulders that make it kinda ambiguous. women usually have sloped shoulders. it kinda looks like she's shrugging. have you thought about maybe making her arms thrust out, like she's spinning amongst the flower petals? because that's what the background kinda makes me feel like. her pose is a little too static.



please comment on mine if you've got some time:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45521/Blind_Love

The over all theme is sorta static and sad, so her blank stance works as is, thought I was think of having her hands open and her arms out a little more to make it seem like she's interacting with the petals

I'll give it a try and see what happens

I love how simple it is. I am usually not fond of blue but you did a great job with the color combo. Love it.



Visit mine please?

she still looks manly uhhgg

I'm gonna redraw her later

thanks about the blue by the way

none of my other combination were working well



Uhhggg and she still looks weird, but now it's defiantly a back

I'll just redraw her when I'm not sleepy

try getting rid of the details on her skin maybe? i think it's making her look kinda muscly, which could contribute to the manliness.

I like it as it is.

lol

Itīs a brilliant job...well done it hyexz!



Please, can you help me with my design?

Just an idea now


She's pretty and not going anywhere like the flowers


Fiddling with it more later

uhmmm

so the flash totally isn't working yarg

Alright looks like we're all set

Now to remake a colored thumbnail for submitting

Thanks for the help peoples