changed some stuff from the original

i really like it

but i think you should make the cast shadow a more defined heart

and not so dark

lighten it up a bit

mind a commenting?

I wasn't even intending for it to be a heart but it kinda is, great eye, I'll do that

Yeah I like the heart shadow idea... as long as it's not completely unbelievable as shadow... And colors are good. Maybe a lighter gray shirt would work.

I personally like the darker shirt, but maybe the bin should lighten up slightly, to draw attention straight to the middle.



Could you please help with my critique?

http://threadless.com/critique/468806/Squared

good design, I would wirk more with the shadow but its great



check mine as well please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46222/My_favorite_toy