I was going to write a more in-depth description of what the shirt means, but I think it is better to see if people can figure it out on their own, so I can know if it is even understandable. I love Star Wars, I hope you do too!



Accepting all critiques!!! Tell me what you think, please!

I'd buy it.

1. The fire is all copy/pasty, and that won't fly.



2. Any true Star Wars fan knows that R2-D2's center leg protrudes from the middle.

I'm with professor E on both counts. I'd consider redrawing him completely actually, as r2d2 is pretty spherical up top. and the boxes should be getting smaller further back.



Please Vote For My Design!

i designed the fire myself

thanks though. i'll redraw r2d2 for sure

I like it, but the blurred out (sun is that?) in the background draw attention away from the main focus. Everything is very angled and the sun doesnt really fit well



Could you please help with my critique?

http://threadless.com/critique/468806/Squared

yeah i didn't originally have the gradient... its supposed to be like fire ambience glow... but yeah... i added it cause i found out that they could do gradients. does anyone else have any feedback on that?



I UPDATED R2D2! its great... so much better. i'll put it up soon.

The new version introduces the new and improved R2D2 along with some different flame shape, and the original idea that included no gradient. What do you think?

i'll be honest, the idea behind the shirt is pretty out there. i kinda get it, but im wondering if i dont...



whats really going on with the death star there... ?



maybe simplify the idea down a bit and streamline the imagery to give a communicate a clearer idea

haha 'give a communicate' (im really good at communicating myself)

that's what i was worried about. thanks. i'll try to work on that.



the death star is a hologram... is that clear?

btw thanks for commenting