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Kasleberry
Kasleberry on Jun 12 '09
Some fish with legs, they know how to use them.
swimgirl45
swimgirl45 on Jun 12 '09
haha these are fun. i think i like the grey back best. i feel like there should be a lil more w/ it, something for the backgroung... like water or trees or clouds? good start haha



thanks for the crit! got some new colors up: catfriend
talilama
talilama on Jun 12 '09
haha, that is so cute! maybe give them gills to make em look more fishy?
SusanTuma
SusanTuma on Jun 12 '09
How about a few scales? Other than that, I think this is a great illo. Colors are great, especially on the grey.
snake1984
snake1984 on Jun 12 '09
great job there, love it on the darker background.



check out mine please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46222/My_favorite_toy



pietrographic
pietrographic on Jun 12 '09
Very cute design. I almost think it should be on a blue shirt though to represent water.
Ars Fera
Ars Fera on Jun 12 '09
Thanks for the comment on my critique!

Good idea lol, this is cute! I would add some scales, and gills like some people have advised already, I would also add some detail to the fishes' tails, maybe give them a few lines like fins have. Otherwise this is great, I like it :)
againstbound
   againstbound on Jun 12 '09
Don't spam design in the running with your links.
Kasleberry
Kasleberry on Jun 12 '09
Oopsie daisies. I didn't realize that was illegal. I am new to this. Thanks for pointing that out. (Literally, your pic points at me!)
againstbound
   againstbound on Jun 13 '09
No problem!
Meekhead
Meekhead on Jun 13 '09
I rather like this. It has a sort of Dr. Seuss feel to it. I think it needs a little something else. Maybe a landscape or a background or some other object.
joyceb
joyceb on Jun 13 '09
very fun looking... i think it could be cool if there were some super crazy bright trippy colors if that makes sense. like neons and such. i like it though
CazKing
   CazKing on Jun 13 '09
this is pretty cool. I think I would prefer a bit of background so they weren't floating - but good idea though!
Montro
   Montro on Jun 13 '09
Some detail on the background would be nice. Good job!
Amundaz
Amundaz on Jun 13 '09
Need something more and something to represent water.

Maybe waves? Or a blue color shirt.



Check out mine?
yushie
yushie on Jun 14 '09
I second adding some background. Nice job on the shirt :) It's adorable.



Critique mine, please?
Kasleberry
Kasleberry on Jun 15 '09
Thanks everyone...anymore advice?
DonCardona
DonCardona on Jun 15 '09
yeah some Scales might look good.. either way nice job!!



Would you mind taking a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46178/MicroHEART

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kiran86
kiran86 on Jul 26 '09
Really nice.. but maybe you should try with another t-shirt colour.. maybe blue? But I like it anyway : )



really nice! maybe you could try changing the t-shirt colour, but that's great anyway :)



P.S. If you don't mind, why don't you tell me what do you think about mine? :P thank you
Simps0n
Simps0n on Jul 26 '09
cool design!



check this out : (if you like Michael Jackson)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48957/Michael_Jackson#v2
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