Well, this is a first version, so don't hesitate to write critiques, they are very welcome!!!!

hahaha this is funny ...when I see it I have only one impression in my head and thats ouch...so close to the wires haha.

I like that..you know, maybe you could some joke there

like they are louder and better then birds so they are pushed out;]

like draw some seroiusly angry birds flying away:]]]]]



check mine please if u can thanks a lot

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46222/My_favorite_toy

It needs some cleaning up I think, but it's a great design.



can you score or critique a bit of my work? here

lovely...this ones is brilliant!



I´m agree with emily...cleaning up.

Made differents sizes for the notes and put over the lines like a pentagram.



No se si me he explicado bien, básicamente lo que ya te han dicho..limpiar e intentar que la ilustración tenga un sentido, una broma..un detalle mágico, siendo música se lo merece.

Intenta escalar los tamaños de las notas para darle perspectiva e introducelas en las líneas..como un pentagrama.





He hecho cambios en mi tee que tu me aconsejastes:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46700/Love_in_sale#v2



Gracias, seguimos en contacto.

Thanks, will be in contact soon.

Very good design and very positive I must add.

sequel to fiddler on the roof. fund it. haha.



i really like it though. but i have huge fascination with silhouettes.



it think you should have the notes coming out of the top right only. when it crosses the wires it kinda disrupts the piece.

Nice idea, but the quality is not that good.

great idea. The placement just made that even better. Never saw them as music lines. =D Agree with the previous posters. Should run it through Illustrator and trace it with the pen tool.



Can you please comment on my V2: Terra Micro

Nice idea, I think you could improve it by reducing the number of telephone wires and tweaking the composition and placemet of the image. Personally I'd prefer the t shirt if the design wasn't printed full out as you have it at the moment but printed a bit smaller.



Please critique my designs here... http://www.threadless.com/profile/171360/ben_buzzkill/critiques

Less wires and you're good to go! (anything more will just clutter it)



take your time and comment Stoned if you can :]

This one is a pretty old design I let down for a moment, but I'm going to re-work it!

So thank you for the advices!!!!