hi there.nice design, I would just try to play more with
the text, not sure if black looks good next to these light colors.
maybe dark brown?

check out mine please thx
http://www.threadless.com/critique/46222/My_favorite_toy

altered the text a little

i think it should say oopsie, like the title. cute idea, and thanks for the help on mine!

Very cute, you might even consider having the toppled one open a bit, possibly even with the tiny doll inside fallen out. I agree that it should say "oopsie"

p.s. thanks for the crit! i have new colors up: catfriend

Thanks for the comment on my critique!
Lol, I think this is funny.. I think they could use some shadows on the ground though, but that's really all I would add, I like this lol, awesome job

I agree that it should say oopsie, and that maybe the last doll should be open,a nd an even smaller falling out... but i like the disgn, very cute.

Could you please help with my critique?
http://threadless.com/critique/468806/Squared

i think you should tilt them all slightly like they've all been moving, and the poor little one got knocked down by the rest of em, like dominoes almost......


could you help me out if you've got a sec?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/46311/The_Ripening

thanks for the constructive criticism :)

Changed the text and altered the last doll, making it seem like another doll is falling out of it.

Aw, it's cute!

i like the new version, it's super cute.

I don't think that you need oopsie in there if you made the dolls go diagonally down the shirt

I agree..."oopsie" isn't needed really. But, if you were to keep oopsie in, it needs to be incorporated more into the design. That would be cool if you made some unique font that said oopsie and was curving around the smaller doll that is on it's side.
The colors are great...I am seeing it on a different color shirt tho.
Maybe yellow or blue or something sweeter!

Great job! Thanks for my crit! ; )

i like the idea ... but try use a more stylish and cooler font for "oopsie" :)

Please see my design and tell me what you think :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45855/Ugly_Duckling

Thx

I think it'd look nicer if the dolls were all different, and yet similar looking (color scheme, face, etc.) And, details! That'd really make this idea pop!

I would remove oopsie, I don't think it is needed as the design speaks for itself.