don't know if i should pursue this idea of having a parrot inside your shirt?

still have to add it's body, wings and a lot of color...



what do you think?

this is great. Just add the color and wings like you said and it will be perfect.



Please comment on my critiques. Thanks.

yes, this is interesting, make it more cage like, and further the work.

maybe think about not making it look like a cage but more like a pattern or design. try making some squares bigger than others and see how that looks like.



check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41400/Squarephant#v4

^i agree :) more cage like

Adding all that would definitely be a ton of work - to avoid it, what if you just had the legs, a wing, and the face bursting out as if through the actual fabric - like a ripped paper sort of thing?

I like the concept!



I agree with SusanTuma. I think it would add more to the idea of a parrot insider your shirt if it looked like it was ripping through some of the fabric :)



Great detail on the bird!!





Suggestions please!