There's not much to say about it...

All I ask is for some feedback.

Please please please tell me what you think



tks anyway :]

try using turcoise or other color instead of grey for the whater on earth planet, nice you put latin america in the center. thanks

I think that this is really cool but you should use more color. Maybe you could make the branch from which the things are growing brown and as el peligro said, the earth blue. You could also look at possible background colors.



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pretty!



it'll be more interesting on a different colored shirt i think.. or maybe more colors to the design?





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good composition, but like they said more colors... please critique mine! thanks

i think it's a little busy, maybe if you simplify some.



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not sure if the earth concept will go too well tho specially since a few weeks ago the green contest just ended with a ton of similar concepts, but if you really wanna keep working on this one I suggest a diff tee color maybe?

Thanks for the comment :)

I like the added blue for the earth, it looks much better. For sure change the shirt color, maybe black would be a very cool contrast with the lighter colors of the whole design. And I don't think the concept won't go well.. I think you should submit it if you like it, it may go over awesome! You never know!

yeah, I was gonna try some other diff shirt, but I completely forgot about it! I'm gonna work on that for the next version.

About the green contest, I completely missed it :(

yet I had this idea only bcuz my boss asked for some designs for a fragrance shop with some spring thematic. while I was designing for the shop I came up with that so I thought "why not?!"



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i like it, but i think the same thing as alexmdc. nevertheless, i think you should go with another color. its a very pretty design though.

I'm thinking about giving it some time before submiting it anyway. I kinda agree with u guys about the whole green contest thing.

I'd like to see the tree being more earthy looking, with a bark feel, and integrating into the world more.



It's a lovely design moving in the right direction!



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this is quite nice. try it on some other tees other than white.

A very lovely design! I agree with greenttentacle, that the tree could be more tree-like and earthy looking.



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good idea I like that, try different color background

on white it looks kind of plain and thats a shame because

it has great potencial.:] good job

Definitely change the shirt color, and I agree with greenttentacle. Make the tree more bark-looking, and maybe a little more brown and less gray.

Yeah, I agree - diff color tee, and maybe tweak the grey just slightly to give it a more "living" feel. But sweet!

deff agree with tweaking the grey. i really like the design but it seems a little dull, maybe after the grey change itll be heaps brighter, if not maybe change the green a little brighter

differ t color would be good. maybe a bird in there, could be fun and a lil different. its a lovely design though!



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Yes, make the tree bark more brownish.



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i agree brownish color will make it pop nice job!!



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nice, I scroll work looks good, but I would change the color on the tree. Very cool.