I would appreciate any feedback anyone has. Too violent? Too dumb? Don't bother submitting?



Just in the sketch stage, thanks for looking!

This concept is definately Threadless material all the way! I really like the concept!



Go for it!

cant wait to see more versions!!

ahhhh hahahahaha.



That is a really funny concept.

thanks! anyone see anything that needs a changin?

color this man! really like this.!



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I love this idea, it's great! One thing though, when you come to vectorize it, you should raise Caesar's right eye slightly as it looks a bit wonky how it is now.

Funny stuff..! You've got 3 swards in the air and one down, looks a bit unbalanced... other wise can't wait to see the later versions...



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thanks for the suggestions, i think i will raise the eggs arm....does feel a little unbalanced.

Ha-ha! Good one! Agree with the sword. I'm wondering if you even need the "Caesar" label, I think the illo pretty much tells the whole story. Your call. Anyway, all your illos are well rendered, so I'm looking forward to seeing how you progress with this one. Cheers!

The crouton looks like a Romanesque Sponge Bob Square Pants. Maybe it'll look differently when colored.

Maybe the eggs sword could look like it's in motion and just came down on the top of Caesar's head, knocking the cap to the floor while dressing flies from his head. The sense of motion might add a lot to the scene.

lol nice color it in & i'm not really sure if the person between the egg and the lettuce is a tall cruton or what. check out mine thx





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i was afraid of the sponge bob reference. not really sure how to keep a square crouton from looking a little like sponge bob. the guy between the egg and lettuce is a strip of grilled chicken. i know thats unclear now, im hoping with color i can clear it up. if not i might turn him into a carrot.

Maybe give the crouton a little bit of crust, like the fancy restaurant home made croutons

Ha! Great idea. I have to agree with Quister, I don't think you even need the label. It's pretty clear what's going on. Maybe you could have some droplets of dressing flying off the daggers to emphasize that they're stabbing him repeatedly, not just standing over him with daggers raised. Looks great, though, and I'm looking forward to the next version.

lOl! this is awesome.



I think the tall guy in the middle is a carrot or celery? hard to tell without coloring right now.



not all croutons come out perfectly square. so maybe take off a bit of him? it will probably not as sponge-boby once you color it in.



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yeah continnue with it, i wouldnt worry too much abt the spongebob yet, wait till its colored in and see if it still looks alike.

xD I like it, with color will be very nice.



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Thanks for all the great comments on the first version. Made some changes and inked it. Any advice is appreciated.

looks good!

thanks dudes!

yea im going to do something with the background, saving that for last.

BRILLIANT!

thanks

anybody anybody?

"Tu Quoque Crouton?"

i love it! I think it's a really cool idea and the illustration is very well done. are you going to add colour though? just asking.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/45810/retro_crazy

yup ill be adding color.

just a minor thought, not sure if you're able to change this though;



the villains' arms seem a little.. flat. As in, they don't look like they're about to attack Caesar...they just look like they're holding their arms in the air. The guy on the right is the most noticeable one to me.



Another thought; maybe try to make the floor marble-esque? I believe he was killed indoors, so something along those lines might look better.



Other than that, great work! Love the facial expressions.

Nice linework dude. Can't wait to see it in colour.

buahahaha very cool, no suggestions so far looks good, and great idea :)

Looking real good, the egg's sword being up really helped the composition. Expectantly waiting, along with everyone else, to see the color! Cheers!

Genious... wish i could come up with such concepts... my only inital comments are the legs of ceasar look a little flat perhaps due to the placement of the left foot by the right knee. Would suggest a revised position to solve this minor issue. As with the rest looking forward to colour!



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oh nice!!



You should try cracking the top of his bottle cap too.. adding to his damage!



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I think it looks really good! I would like color, though :)

OH man..... thats funny. what a bout a piece of lettuce terrified on the side? Can we see the placement? and how about with color?



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thanks for all the great suggestions and kind words! hopefully ill have the first color version up tonight or tomorrow.

I Love it.

Just posting where Im at with coloring. Still a decent amount to do, needs a background as well. Thoughts? thanks for looking.

I think just a simple silhouette or outline of a Roman column and building will be great for this

Also, maybe use less face shadows. There are a lot of shadows on the lettuce and cheese guy's faces - and I'm not sure they're totally necessary for the design.

I rly like the idea!

Didn't u forget to colour the dressing's legs?!

The egg was kinda rough for me to get it... Maybe u could show a little more of the yolk...

The outline of a Roman column might be good idea too...



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thanks super ryan, definitely going to play around with the shading and color before i submit.... maybe too much shading on the faces

God, I love this!

I noticed, too, that the legs look forgotten.



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yea still a lot left to color

haha. i love how everyone looks roman. Is that a crouton to the left? Perhaps work on the 'blood', because it looks a bit odd in that shade. I know it's the sauce, but i think it needs adjusting a bit.





Can you critique mine if you get a chance? It's Castles of Sand. I've got yet another new version up - with placement of everything, so this is sorta a critical time for feedback. Please help out? Thanks!

thanks! anyone else think the blood looks weird?

hehe funny design what has a point.

I think you just forget to color the legs of the ceasar.

blood is cool by me, its a dressing:]]]]so it makes logic sense

like that.

What do you think? I think its almost ready to post. Help please!

sub sub sub

great work!

thanks flux!

With or without word bubble?

hahaha love it! i like it with :) i feel as though it needed some green there :)



also, have a look at mine :) critique

I like the bubble

2 for word bubble



thanks dudes



super ryan - thanks for all the feedback!

thanks jeffreyg, sounds like i should keep it

this is great. i quite like the bubble. also love the statuette in the background. the only think thats bothering me is the differing heights of the columns as my eye is drawn to them. maybe if they were straight and had a bit along the top connecting them, like more traditions roman columns. and also maybe put a shine on the dressing.



looks great though and think its got a good shot at printing

This is really sweet, loving the bubble as well.

great suggestions, thanks all!

I like it, I le the word bubble, but I also would like a caption in the same font below the picture. The word bubble blends in a bit too much, you know? Still, awesome! This is one of the funnier shirts I've seen in a while!



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The bubble blends and actually adds to the scene. I say go with the bubble. instead of making the columns the same height I would just drop the color back a little more so they don't draw quite as much attention.

good suggestions, thanks guys,



anyone else find the pillars to be distracting?

yeah. I'd make the pillars further back and to the outside more. They seem kind of squeezed in the middle and should be more of a background

wow this is awesome! I'd say keep the bubble, and maybe make move the pillars more outside the actual design, and arrange the so that they would look good on the chest , if that makes any sense. Then I would say sub. Awesome work



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LOL e tu crouton? Great! I agree with knocking back the pillars a bit. I think maybe the ground work could use a bit of the same. Anyway, great idea and awesome illo! Cheers!

I like it with it, submit it, its awesome, i like the pillars in the background it adds a good balance, comment on mine?: http://www.threadless.com/critique/46341/Robot_love

hey, i don't know if anyone has said this yet, but is it e tu brute or et tu? i know it's nit-picky, but that was just bothering me a little



on the other hand, the design looks really great!



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wow it is "et" not "e". thanks for finding that shinannigan! that would have sucked haha.

Generally opposed to including text in designs but you blended it in well enough, fits the style of the illustration and everything! It's really funny- I'd definitely submit this, great job.