señores y señoras....

this is my third try into the imagination theme.

hope you all like it,

any comments???

I'm looking for a TITLE any suggestions?



gracias...

I like this very much!

Maybe you could try an asymmetrical placement, just to improve a bit.

And what about "Things on my head" for the title?

[A light use of puff ink would be nice too...]



Constructive criticism

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My slogans

this is a win. love your display presentation also

this is so cute! and will do great when subbed.

one thing tho, is the moon really smoking on the bottom left :-) haha... i don't mind, but you're sure gonna get more comments about that when subbed (great kids shirt you know)

and title-wise it's always hard to get a good one... can't help you there...



my gorilla could also use some voting help to reach the finish

well "things on my head" is a good one, but I want it something more about imagination, like "inside her head"...

The moon isn't smoking haha, its just blowing some clouds

gracias!

this would be a great kids tee! lovely illustration.



Give it a kids tee kinda name:



'Clara's Amazing Dreamhat'

oooooh, he's blowing some clouds..... that's okay



haha! ;-)

we're all kids man hehe ;)

How about.. Imagination Isn't Just Something in Our Heads



Maybe a bit long?.. Love the colors though! 5$ from me when you submit!



Suggestions please!

what else, amigos???

señores... any other title sugestion?¿

Thinking Cap? Looks great!

really nice, great feel to it, looks ready to submit!

Great lyrical, creative, stylish, and beautifully illustrated design. It even works on the dreaded (stains easily, grays after washing, makes me look fat) white tee. I'd say sub it as is and I would be happy to $5 it. Maybe show a mother and child model and a onesie design when you sub it, so you expand everyone's thinking about its potential (see below link). As far as titles, maybe just "Imagine" or "i m a g i n a t i o n" with spaces so it looks like it's being spelled out, as children sometimes do. Maybe "Kid's Stuff" or "Child's Play" to refer to a youngster's imagination? Anyway, great work. Cheers!

zetinas mom baby onesie model

I think the concept is very catchy. It's got imagination written all over it! You've gotten enough confirmation, so I need not go on! Sub diss!

Edo Crunk! Getcho' Samurap on!

great colours and great watercolors quister you are the man!! nice critics like always!!



great illustration i think its ready

same, I just add a child model at placement....

ready to sub???

ready to sub????

YES! Let us know when it's up. Cheers!

ok, any other comments?

and I loved the idea of "i m a g i n a t i o n" as a title

i like the linework!

nice

Lovely design, I think it's ready :)

well thier cute

I like the water color effect. Submit!



Crit me Please?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46075/Hot_Diggity_Damn

i like it as a kids shirt, not so much adult.



check out my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46120/Fish_Fishing

1.- Some changes on the color (I think this version looks better)

2.- I erased the nose

3.- Another placement option

COMMENTS??

gracias!

Go for Placement 2! Looks a lot better without the nose and color improved too.

Great illustration!

I just think thats a design girls would wear.

It looks totally cute!

I love the linework and the way you colored it.

Are you going for a simulated process? or you will rather use halftones to create the textures?

I think center placement looks better.

And yes, these colors look much better, and the girl is cutter without a nose.

btw... hablas español? de donde eres?

uummmmhh... well I think simulated process Its the one.

(Y simon... soy de mexico man)

Great design, as I've said. Without the nose is cuter. Love the little girl model. I would definitely show a onesie as well to increase the appeal. Cheers!

how to make a lazy link

yeeah thanks man!!!! lets try:



cervezagratis

woooooow it works, thanks, Im not that good at HTML (at all!!!)

This is so awesome! Very very cute. I personally like it on the side. Gives it a little more quirk. (Not that it needs more ) I think it's ready!



I agree with quister - add a onesie and people have an added "aaawwww!"



Will you give mine a look? Raining Elephants Lazy Link ;)

ok let see how it works on a onesie

thanks guys

this ones are the true colors, I dont know why Flash, change the colors every time....

the tittle its gonna change to I M A G I N A T I O N

any final comments????

thanks to all 4 the help

Very cool, a bit more to the right just so it doesn't get lost in the inevitable waist/hip wrinkles on the adult model. Otherwise it's as good as it gets. Let us know when it's up. Cheers!

nice.... any other comment

design up in to score, please comment guys! please score and comment