Please some advice for this artwork :)

I really like the idea...My only thing though is that every block is it's own letter except for the second to last one which serves as both the M and E. Maybe add another block? or combine more? Just some thoughts. I like the idea though. This will turn out really cool.

i suggest you change the S into a more black letter S instead of putting that mirror image there. Makes it look more like 25 than an S. I also dont think you need those people around.



having said that, your color scheme is pretty good

Also i think that the double U almost looks out of place because all the other blocks are just one letter besides the S. the right side of the S block looks kind of like a dollar sign too.

thx u for some advice.

Wow! I really like this!



I'm actually mostly okay with the letter blocks, except that now it's been mentioned, the right side S definitely looks like a dollar sign. Maybe you just need to remove the tongue on the top side.



I think that the perspective of your background characters needs to fit better with the dotted lines The SUMMER and lines receed with perspective but the characters are all at the same scale (except the people on S).



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Nice!

Maybe the blocks could be in a place other than the center of the shirt, and you could add some birds around the wires...

Are the wires thought to be embroidered? It would be amazing with that effect.



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How about this. i change the view object and revise the letter block also colour t-shirt on navy blue.

better. but i have no idea what the guy is doing

he draw the shadow :)

ok ic. u need to make that more obvious :) good idea nonetheless.

thx mate :)

yeah agree with agrimony - it's not clear what he's doing.

I alos really liked the style of v1 - the letters needed work which you seem to have addressed here, but the people were awesome.

I also think the dark colour also doesn't make this look like a very summery shirt - I'm not saying it has to be bright bright bright, but navy certainly doesn't say "summer" to me



got 2 critiques at the moment, hamster power and buck-a-doodle-doo - any feedback or suggestions appreciated thanks!

adding paint cans beside the hand child and splater.

To me the U looks kind of Wish (Double U ish).

I agree, it should just be solid on one side like the rest. I'm thinking the character should have a shadow.

change the color t shirt into sky blue :)

Definetely change the color of the t shirt. It's too dark.



I can't tell what the guy is doing.



Crit me please?



HOT DIGGITY DAMN!

Ok guys, thx for advice, i'll revise :)

The U confused me. perhaps it would help if you made the left side of it solid, kind of like the other letters are?



I agree with youknowwho4eva ^ I thought it was a W at first.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/40027/Durian_stinking_fruit

this is new version, change the colour tee and artwork. how do u think?

GREAT!