wht do u guys think of the color?

I really like the colors.. but what color t shirt? only white? you may want to play around with the colors of the background!



I like it, although the guy on the bottom looks as if it is a vector brush.. I believe Ive seen it before, it makes it everything else stand out, but you can tell because of his lack of alternating colors.. I honeslty think the image of the girl could stand alone! (in my opinion, of course!)



Critique mine? Here

thanks TOOLarea, of course i will incorporate tee as a background...still deciding which colors to go with.



i agree, the girl can stand alone...on the other hand, i thought the guy would add a kick to it all? or perhaps, i'll replace it with a genie lamp, sort a.



p/s: the guy..think u've seen it in banksy's website. a strret artist. just elevate it a bit. :)

Yeah thats a banksy alright... thats a very well know image mate you cant go round pinching his work... definatly loose the guy!

standz, well i guess, i'd loose the guy *LOL* in respect of banksy ;)



will come back something to replace the guy.



cheers!

sadly, V3 & v4 wont show...but its the same as V2...wonder y it keeps failing whnever u submit newer versions.



by the way fellas, hope u like it & share with me ur ideas ;)

Sorry re-read my post i came on a little strong. but i think its best you losse the guy. I like the idea of the lines coming off the girl but i think you need to make a better transition perhaps have a bit more of her body fading off and breaking up into the lines. Another comment I would suggest is that the lines flow more in the direction they are going at the moment they double back on themselves at odd angles and a bit more like ink on water which is a fair representation but for me anyway it jars the eyes a little. I would also play around with colours (or colors... sorry im british) a little more. Can we see the design big again its a little too small at the moment.



please help crit Release Parachute 50yrds

no worries standz, i wouldnt wanna diss other banksy's fans coz im a fan myself :P



hmm make the lines flow as if it were ink on water is a great one! n yes, yes, yes, still figuring wht color would give an umph to this one hehe. ur concrete suggestions really help man!



p/s: its cool, my boss is a brit too ;) so im used to it haha

Ha well i was actually commenting that currently it looks like ink on water and was suggesting more that it all flow in one direction. But feel free to take what ever is useful out of my comments... look forward to the next version...

i played around with the color, added the hand cursor object n dropped some shadow...i'd figure ths looks better on bright pastel colored t's :)

maybe i came off a bit too early in v.6



here's a bit detailed view of the design..

i dont like the hand on a dot thing.... maybe a lamp or bottle that the lady can be coming out of? and then if you want the hand still it could be touching the lamp/vase...



could you look at mine?

I kinda like the guy from the guy from the first one, but I also like the cursor hand here. Both work well. Which do you personally like more?

I liked the guy from the first version; the colors worked well.

The hand looks out of place...



Check mineout?

thanks fellas for the feedbacks! i personally like the guy silhoutte in v1 too, but its banksy's. shouldnt pinch someone else's work.



anyway, heres the latest version....Your Click is My Command!

har har harrrr!!!

anyone? :(

I wonder now wht n where needs work?

ooo i like this... fun mix of magical and computer-y... this looks reall good. like the addition of the pink background. though her one cheek looks pointy and not round... very cool though



could you look at mine?

one click away from psychedelic dream! phizzatttt!

not sure about the click idea. i think its good without the click hand. id make her nose a little bit more noticeable as well because its a bit too faint at the moment. this is a nice improvement from past versions. what's the placement and shirt color like?



thanks for the comment.

thanks for ur thoughts, JP.



i'm unsure myself to go with or without the hand cursor...haha.



hope this placement suits the design ;)

that's really better than the others versions. The hand curser is cool, the style is very vectorial, it make sense for me.

Maybe work a little more on the placement, the composition to make something more adapted to the shirt.

it is clever placement

thanks fellas ;) i'll try n play around with the placement n see how it goes from here.

I like this version! My very first impression was that the image was crooked, then I got to thinking that it might also be a bit small on the shirt. You'll have to be careful not to loose the 'story' it you enlarge it. By that I mean be careful not to loose things in the curve of the torso of a wearer; if your curser hand wraps too far around the waist we'll lose that information.



You are very close to done, I think.

Nice design.



RE: Placement-- I like the placement as is. IF you were wanting to enlarge it you could rotate the design clockwise slightly then enlarge without losing any of the story to the pits.



If you've got a bit of time check out the latest version of my design

I really like this though it could be a bit bigger.

I think it would be better if the lamp looked like a computer icon that you would click on.



need some help thanks:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46909/Call_Me_Old_Fashioned

nice done man

if you have time look at mine i need your help

I like the illustration but think it would look better on a white/beige/grey/brown t-shirt.

first up, thanks to all the feedbacks from v11.!



i've reduced some colors, maintaining it to 8 colors, but i personally would still go for v11 than this one...



you may note the design is slightly enlarged compared to v11. so....question is, v11 or v12?



cheers! :)

in v11 the green accent does alot of good and her angle is nice.

in v12 the new size is good, it's more blue, and the lamp looks too large.



design is nice. does adding a few more dots and color spots up top, around the fountain head, increase interest and focus on the girl?

it's true the few extra colors make it looks beter.

thanks fellas, im relieved to i wasnt alone to go with my hunch to maintain v11 . i suppose this kinda design needs more colors to add life to it.



dleeson2, u've got interesting points there. i'll c how i can incorporate it in my coming v.



thanks guys ;)

if you go type flickr threadless blank tees in google it will give you a tone of good sized blank tees to work with which presentation can greatly affect how well people score other then that great illo and i agree placement and extra colors are pluses



if you get a moment

Lep-RECON

maticus, thts 1 handy advice! got them!



thanks a bunch man!

Oh, I LOVE it! Although, the fuzzy black t-shirt behind it isn't helping it much. =/ I would suggest placing it on something else, just so it looks better at first glace!



Also, I don't know what I think about the pixelated arrow.



Hey- if you get a chance....I could use some thoughts on mine!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47422/Beautiful_Mind#v2

hey this is cool idea! but i'd make the smoking thing that out from the lamp more simple thou. and the hand maybe it would be better if it's on the same style like the lamp?



Thanks for your comments on my design :)

This is coming along really well-- I agree that it would be good to see it on a crisper shirt image.



It'd be great if you could critique the latest version of my design - Never mind the tigers...



And / or vote for my first submission - Tiger-Bat

after a long thought..i finally decided to stick to this version n gave it a try for submission...still pending approval. fingers crossed.



i appreciate all of ya'll comments, really helped a lot. thanks ;)



fingers crossed!

hmmm....the colours are nice, but seeing from the other versions... i actually like some of the old ones more!

Plainly because the "sparkles" or whatever you want to call the lights are more free flowing and magical. Here they look a bit bunched up...

I'm not a bit fan of the pixel-y hand...maybe you could try without?



please crit mine if you can: here

I think this version is well done. I like the colors and the sort of way they splatter, the hand really takes away from the design. It's interesting, but it has no continuity with the rest of the piece. Nice work though





if you get a chance would you score my design? It's called Worlding Another

thnx fellas! Appreciate ur crits. Btw it's now up for scoring!



cheers! ;)