Just another day for an average joe riding the subway to work.

He has his briefcase in his lap, and his lunch on hand .

Cool idea. Im thinking you need i little more continuity though. A little more shading on the seats, the trousers and shoes and the bananna/ The left side of his mouth seems to have dissapeared with lack of shading too.

Like the concept



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mm the man-monkey doesn't really look like he is sitting

yeah i think i have to do more with the shading, but i don't want to go over the 8 color limit. any ideas of finding a way around it?

i love the colors but i think it might be easier to tell that he is sitting if maybe he is sitting on a park bench? the perspective would be easier to see with that vs the bus bench. funny though! i like it!

Just continue to use the colours you have. Just things like the sides of the suitcase are missing and his trousers seem to meld in to his shoes... just needs a little tidying up thats all...



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I like your idea and illustration. I think maybe it needs to be refined a touch. Maybe a bus stop bench with a bus stop sign behind him. Might be interesting. Just a thought. Good work.

the idea is really cool :)... only try to work a little bit with the shadings ..youre doing great!

You shouldn't crop the seat on the edges of the shirt. It takes away from the design and will be harder to print on the shirt correctly.

I agree with the edge- cropping comment.

you should work on the face of the monkey. I think it should be enough!



If you want to critique mine: Polly on air

i like the dark blue option