These little snakes lived in my sketchbook for a long time and now I thought I had to do something with it. Check the result, hope you like it.



Greetz,



Mark

haha, i think its a great idea :) I would prefer a different color tee though. Also, try giving the snake a texture or a color maybe? Give it a shot, it might look better. Overall, great idea. Very nice Illustration also. Just needs work on the colors :)



I'd appreciate your vote on my design, Hope. Please do check all the colors. Thanks :)

It can be printed on any color tee! I did't add color to sthe snake cause I want it to be sketchy.

It's amusing, but i'm not sure it suits a t-shirt style. Maybe if you made the worms "bookworms" and add some books, in a sort of Where's Waldo manner, it could bring the design from sketchbook to graphic tee?



Also, lose the pink tee background. You may like to consider trying our your design on models. You can download Threadless t-shirt images from Flickr. Search "blank tee Threadless" in the groups search and you'll find a plethora of blank tees (lots of colours) to use as templates for your design.





Can you critique mine? It's Psychedelic Soup



Thanks! :)

With a few newly created snakes I created the text "So cute". Because that's what this little snake is "cute".

Im not so keen on it on red. red is firery not cute. try pink or blue. Their expressions are priceless. Love it.



Check out my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46120/Fish_Fishing

its true the snake is very cute

maybe clean up the lines, but other than that submit



hook me up

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46239/Lava_Friends

Thanks for the comment!

The snakes are very cute, and I agree with the change of tee color, I'm not sure if you need to clean up the lines, it gives it a sort of whimsical look I think. Awesome job so far

deff agree with a lighter colour change, looks good tho, love the snakes

The pink color of the Tee (like version 1) is back and I think it's cuteness is even better. What do you think?

Nice snake characters, I like it:)

hihihihihi it's tickles me....Submit!



Please see my design and tell me what you think :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/45855/Ugly_Duckling



Thx

Thank you all for you helpful comments!

Hey - this is cute! the pink really makes it pop. The only thin - the "t" is a little hard to read - try giving a little more bend to the little dip on the top right....?



Mind giving mine a look? Tongue-sicle

and yea, that's cute, the pink colour really suit the graphic. the graphic itslef looks cute, overall ok i think..:))

They look soooooo kewl. One just one suggestion, make the worms heads with some different expressions. XD

Like advised by some of you I removed a few of the tongues and I tried to make the "t" better readable.

Aww this is gorgeous! I'd like to see the snakes have a bit of colouring, even if it's just light and dark pink spots or stripes to reflect the tee colour. Would be great for a kids tee!





Could you maybe also critique mine? It's Castles of Sand V8.



Oh, also, if you haven't yet, i'd love a vote/ comment on my submission Psychedelic Soup.



Tell your friends :P



Thanks!

you could try using a light green to fill the snakes then a darker green for the outlines.



maybe you could help me finalize my piece?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46340/In_God_Wii_trust

Sorry, no colors on the snakes! They are the way I ment them to be.

The more color the snakes get the further they fall back in the background. And all the positive comments in V3 give me the feeling that I should stick with it.

Then I think your all set.

This design is surprisingly legible, even shrunk down to fit on the model's t-shirt it is still very easy to read. So I don't think you need to work on its form at all. I'd say it's ready to submit!

I like it, however I'd maybe add some shading so they don't look so flat. Unless that's the style you're going for then by all means submit. Great work!

Awesome simple to the point I like it!



Can you return the critic? http://www.threadless.com/critique/46584/Highway_Robbery#lastcomment

Thank you all for your helpful comments!

I'd like to see shading as raihan42 said. However it is 'so cute' as is.

i dare you to make an 'i' letter this way... :D

thats pretty awesome.

Why can not put links? Is it a joke?

I personally wouldn't wear this final version (I prefer the first one), but I think other people would like it. So submit it!