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v1 Coming Home, 1089 days ago, click to expand
v2 Coming Home, 1089 days ago, click to expand
v3 Coming Home, 1089 days ago, click to expand
v4 Coming Home, current version








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Version 1 - 1089 days ago
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nyarm
nyarm on Jun 02 '09
Ack! Don't mind v4, my browser screwed up o.O Current version is v3 :) Sorry!
kath.borup
kath.borup on Jun 02 '09
I really like the photo it has this awesome eerie look to it. how bout something on the road...like those lines you see at crime scenes but with the shape of a bat....hmmm sorry mabye that was a dumb idea, but i think adding something to the photo that looks like its really part of the scene graphics wise yet supprising/unusual would be cool.
Seriously People
Seriously People on Jun 02 '09
Think v1 has good atmosphere and is the right direction. Maybe drop out the house detail by the cars and possibly on the other side of the road too. I think this would draw your attention into the image better, be a little less distracting and maybe allow for a large print on the t?



Which brings me to my next point which someone has mentioned already...something on the road in either high contrast or colour. I'm thinking a long shadow of a person extending into the image from the viewer...possibly with an axe...or chainsaw. Could be fun to play with.
Allan BARTE
Allan BARTE on Jun 02 '09
Hehe ! ouhhhhhhhh ! Spooky !



I think there is too much difference of style between the draw and the photos... And the black of eyes should occupied better the with. Looks a little bit randomly placed here. :-)

Good job on the photo.



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digsy
   digsy on Jun 02 '09
yeah, i don't think the characters fit as they currently are.

what you could do is put people in the actual scene but in glow ink so they only show up at night.

you could maybe turn it into a crime scene or something liek that too? it's a great pic but needs some sort of context to work on the shirt but far subtler than what you've gone for in the previous versions.

thanks for your comment on mine
Grafica.cz
Grafica.cz on Jun 02 '09
i prefer verion1. The color ghoests are realy strenges



Please critic there
c_lee
c_lee on Jun 02 '09
I love the pacmacesque ghosts in the latest version, tho also like V2 and the eerie green fog
jase face
jase face on Jun 02 '09
v1 is my fav one good work.
macdoodle
   macdoodle on Jun 02 '09
i like vs one also. it is has a cool creepy vibe to it that I like
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