Thank you for the comments.

should I put a hyphen between the G and N?

anything?

hmmm. i would add more detail to them. and a hyphen would seem apropriate. and i would try a different shirt color and placement. check out my critique please.

I'm not terribly fond of the colors.

are you referring too the shirt colour or the gnome colours?

i'm a big fan of gnomes, but not this shirt :(

ah. sorry. i forgot the critique part. try a different placement or sizing.

thanks I will think about resizing, what do you think of the colours someone mentioned that earliar.

v2 of the human g-nome project

how can I make it look more helix like, and maybe should I have 4 different combos of gnomes so the CATG's are more distinguisahble?

any tips?

for you 3 homies who voted needs work, do explain where and how it could use work

I'd make it a bit thinner and do it diagonal, from top right to bottom left -- maybe add in another two sequences. The colors are much better in this version, but maybe use a different shirt color than white?

I'll try out all of those suggestions, I don't know how diagonal placement could look better but I will give it a shot. Thanks Melikochan

Add a bit of depth and that'll make it more helix-y. Otherwise, I really like it. =)



Being a bio-nerd, this shirt really suits me. xD

haha what do you mean when you say adding depth to the helix?

whoops it was supposed to be grey.

grey

By "depth" I mean, have them from different angles. Like, looking down at the hat angle, kind of try and visualize it as it's rotating...



Ah, I fail at explanations.

oh I kind of get what you mean I will try it out.

Gnomes are too simple. Love the idea though. So plz re-work.

needs more strands.





and cowbell.

They need to be gnomes in a science lab in lab coats or something IMO.



They're way to cut and paste at the moment.

the lab coat idea isn't working, when I change the colors around and make more of a lab coaty body along with goggles, the gnomes become unrecognizable. As I said before about the strands more strands don't really work because aswell, and not only that the more I add the more I have to shrink the size of the gnomes which makes it even harder to see what they are.

I'm still working on norwish's depth idea though.