i've plan to submit this one, would u give me some advice, this is fit for threadless or not. thx everyone.

I was almost about to type a comment about the dragon being cross-eyed (although this is a Chinese statue of a dog). Then I saw the fly.

Cute.

I think the fly needs to stand out a bit better or become something brighter - a bee or a butterfly.

perhaps make the fly a firefly with glow in the dark ink for its back end? otherwise this looks awesome, great job.



critique mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45095/Nature_s_Nerves

agree with the above...the fly is not clear enough...

except of that itīs awesome!



Would like to hear your comment on my first submission:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45080/Lil_acute_Dave

well, thank you for some advice, yeah i think that's great idea :)

I thought the fly was somewhat obvious because of the curly trail across the shirt, although maybe the fly could be a different color? maybe something bright, or the firefly idea could be very cool as well

And if you're not too busy, a crit for mine would be very much appreciated

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44775/Copy_Cat

this is the 2nd version, how do u think?

hah this is funny dude submit

love this, the glow effect of the coloring is awesome! fun character too



pleas take a look at mine!

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thanks mate, yeah i will submit the 2nd version :)

lovely

well done illustration and funny design ... to hard to create this combination ... it ready to submit ...

plz vote & comment ...Turn it on

& plz help with this one ...who is he???

Really like this! Great colours and funny idea ^^

Weird. I like it. Nice colours and brilliant rendering of the dragon guard.



Could you critique mine too?:

*Origins of Imagination

*Psychedelic Soup



Thanks!

it was submit session and still pending process, thx mate :)