I always wanted a shirt like this so that's where this idea comes from. Pure desire.

I really like this! Maybe you should mix up the notes color wise though, have some the pink & some white/black depending on the shirt.

It's a solid start.



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its really neat. and unlike some other designs like this I like this one because it stands out but isn't to overdone. I agree though try mixing some colors of the notes. Oh and whit t-shirt is best

i like it a lot. i would buy it as is.... maybe different note colors.... maybe a different color scheme? maybe not.



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Some metallic colors. trying to avoid making it busy... only if others agree with me of course.

I kind of prefer it with plain black symbols. that way its surprisingly bland in a good way though, if you know what i mean. what do you guys think? I could be wrong but I'm just going on my gut feeling.

where can i get me some of those pants?!

man i almost want that to be a keytar

hm my main problem with this right now is those black keys on the keyboard. usually theyd stick out more than the white keys, but in this theyre completely flat which makes it like more like a painted box rather than a keyboard

Everything looks clean. I don't think I'd wear it though

Perhaps more randomness to the musical notes, like some are bigger?

Hmm keytar is a brilliant idea... gets my vote!!



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i agree with agrimony, work on the black keys

I actually preferred it on grey.

It may be only me, I'm not sure about the red bars, they could use.... something.

try it without the symbols in the stars

I thank all suggestions that have given birth to this current version. Don't we all want a shirt that would enhance our air-keytaring?



A question on colors: This is just at 8 I think. But what about the black notes that fall under the 3 layers of outlines that are not fully opaque? do those all count as extra colors and if so, how should i go about remedying that?

Well, I reckon that there is a mighty fine keytar. The background stars are just killing it for me, though. They look really...I dunno...like little decorations that would come in a scrapbook kit or something. They don't say "TOTALLY ROCKING KEYTAR" to me. Maybe you could try this: make the shirt color black, make the stars themselves black, make the symbols inside the stars white (or blue or magenta) and pack them much closer together so that you won't even need the outlines because you'll be able tell that they're stars just from where the symbols get cut off. Whew. Hope that all made sense. I think that way the keytar would jump off the shirt more, and you'd have some nice stuff going on in the background.

Great suggestions! Can we rock out yet?

Am loving the new star backgrounds... not loving the keytar shadow though... its taking over too much. Needs something smaller and less in your face... something to highlight the keytar not take attention away from it!

Has come a long way... thumbs up!



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hm why don`t you try it on some other tee color some screaming colour red, orange or something like this

... just to try :)

yeah its a great illo for sure, but i think it needs a concept. what idea about the keytar could u use?

Personally I don't wear pink - but I like it.

:)

Maybe you should try and curve the instrument a bit, to give the impression that it realy sits on the body.

hmmmmmmmm yea i like it submit it

used a more gender neutral pink, took out a prominent shadow.

This is cool. Maybe can play some effect with the keyboard shadow.



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Fixed the stars

what the hell, I'm sure i commented on last version 5 minutes ago but can't find it now?!?!

anyway, love what you've done with the stars and the perspective of the detail.

think the jam master looks a little flat though - maybe try solidify it up a bit???

I agree, totally into the keytar idea, and dig the stars... but something about the instrument seems flat all around, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Kind of has the remnants of South Park style animation.

tried to make it pop, per demand.

The black definitely gives it more depth. I think that the gray shadow on the right side could use a lower opacity, so it would stand out less.

I'd totally wear this.



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