i'm not to sure to submit this artwork, please suggestion from you guys, what do u think? thanks for advice :)

wow great use of 2 differnt styles! pretty nice

love the birds and the person and the message. not so keen on the colour of the pills though, i think they really clash with the rest of it - very cartoony and kind of frivolous compared to the the rest.

i'm touch and go on the necessaity of the clouds as well. you could maybe have the big pill loking like it's on a flat surface and surrounded by lots of other (maybe different type) pills.

dunno, those are just my initial thoughts, lets see what others have to say



my last critique has been subbed, would love a vote please, thanks!

lol, agrimony posted that while i was typing mine - isn't it funny how i've said i don't like two different styles and he's gone wow on them

just goes to show you can't please everyone!

feel free to ignore me though if you like... his comments are normally pretty sound!

yes, u right i use two different style on it. i was try what digsy said before, use some pills on flat surface but they more small than the main pills, maybe u right i have to try with the same big pills on flat surface, i will try to change. thx mate.

here i use the same style with no sky and more big pills than before, how is about?

I like this better. very cool.

or this one

like the previous one better. less going on, which is better in my opinion.



got a sec?

thanks, its to crowded right.

This has a lot of potential. I mean, I know flocks of birds/things turning into flocks of birds/anything with a bird is a bit of a t-shirt cliche' at this point, but at least this one is doing something more than the half a million 'trees and/or natural element turning into flocks of birds' designs I see every week.



The challenge now is, how do you separate yourself even further from the rest of those designs? A working color palette is a good place to start. While some contrasting palettes work, this isn't one of those cases. At least, not quite. Unified tones, but maybe keeping the stand-out aspects of pill colors could work? Or, instead of making the pills look like candy, a more monotonous, down-like palette could work.



It's things to consider.



Check out my latest if you've got the time!

i like it a lot... maybe try making the pills all pink and white like good and plenty colors... and make the people popping out with magic sparkles rather than birds, or something other than birds.



could you help with my design, swine flew?

i like the color scheme of the pills in the first version more.

thanks guys i will consider for that..

i really liked v2 - i think by doubling up on the people/birds you're actually weakening the effect.

one was stronger.

it going int he right direction and you got some good advice already from people to work on.

2nd version aja bro :)