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i like all the colors. still, i remember test screens having a little less going on in them. but then again i do have a bad memory. How bout three in a diagonal or in a line instead of nine? just an idea.





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colours are good, what does it look like without the checkered background though? i know you'd be losing a lot of the colour difference between the tvs though so maybe it wont work. alternatively you could lose the bottom half of the test pattern so you're only left with the verticle lines and the 2 rows of horizontal beneath them . i think they're a little too busy at the mo - maybe factually correct but test patterns did vary and i think you could bget the idea across with a far simplified version on the screens.

have you looked at other shirt colours as well?



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Really like this desgin! I remember those dang test screens...

Add some detail to the TV, knobs and such.

I like the big group of them...9 is cool.

Maybe a big starburst behind the TVs would bring them all together.



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how about this? including the font...

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I think the text helps. Maybe keep the screens on the tvs but rework the edges of them and make them look a little more realistic with softer edges, you know like old tvs were. Other then that nice work



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Hey dude, nice design, bright colours on a dark background works for me. to be honest, I liked the first design better, but I don't like the text, It seems like the shirt would just be cooler without a reason for it being a shirt. You don't need to explain that they are colour tvs if you see what I mean. If you wanted text in there you could have the tvs each saying something on them. not sure what, but it would be more interesting.

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I agree, the text might be unnecessary. I'd like to see the "circle and grid" pattern in the background, like in the preview graphic, to extend the design beyond the boundary of the 3x3 square.

me, the 1st version is the best! keep the text and make it the text smaller! ...anyway this is cool man! good luck..thanks! :))

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