Yeaaaah ! Super Corn !

ha, very cute.

i wouldn't make super corn pure white though and i don't think the words" sweet corn" is necessary - a tin with just a picture should suffice.

then again, i don' t think "oh look it's super corn" is necessary either - a bigger overall picture with a more defined cape would make that clear too i think.



please can you tell me if you think it's worth pursuing this?

Hi,

I did some changes according to the comment of Digsy.

I deleted the text and put the reference ("Super Corn") on the can that i changed a little.

Super corn is also now not perfectly white.



What do you think of it now folks ? :-)

Hi,

I did some changes according to the comment of Digsy.

I deleted the text and put the reference ("Super Corn") on the can that i changed a little.

Super corn is also now not perfectly white.



What do you think of it now folks ? :-)

funny:) Try place conserve dawn for adde more impact to moving.

cool, i would like to see the flying popcorn more heroic

i think the cape could use some work



Any input for this design?

change the font



i love the idea, but the illustration and then the common font doesnt fit together

agree with axxxxxxxel change the pop font, make it more personal :)



have you tried to use a shadow below the can? to give it a little bit of support, in my opinion... besides that, everything looks good for me!

give the hero some arms maybe? just stick like black arms that are raised in the same fashion supermans are when he's flying. Possibly add legs if that doesnt look too good. Love the idea :D



Please check out my slogans and shirt design, Hope

I would curve the cape more round his 'body/head' rather than a straight edge.



check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44376/Addicted_to_Juice

Oki doki ! Got it.

Erase the font, work on the cap and the super corn, put some shadow down the can, maybe change a little the placement...



It's gonna be nice. Thank's to you all, and see you for the next version ! :-)

Im guesssing your a very nice guy...



Like it but i wouldnt wear it

Here a new version thanks to all your comments.



I changed a bit super Corn (changed his cap and add legs and arms)

I dropped the font ans drew the "pop" word.

And now super Corn is flying higher.

I tried the shadow down the can but it was not convincing.



But now, i think about the 8 colors thing to sub a t-shirt on threadless and i think i'm over it. Do you have a tip, on photoshop or else, to know how many color i used on it ?



Tnaks again for all your comments and advices ! :-)

maybe a little bot higher? just a thougth but i like it

can you cjeck mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44420/melody

is very good, but I think that would be better a little further down, thanks

I like what you've done, but would like to see it mocked up on a model rather than the basic template :)

i love this, it's awesome!

my only comment is that i think the image as a whole should be a bit smaller so that it doesn't fill the whole tee; as NGee said I think once its mocked up on a model you may find the supercorn dude might get a bit lost in the folds, if you get my drift... otherwise excellent work :)

such good art...

i actually like the size and agree with NGee, on a model you'd get a better idea of position, cause i reckon position is the key with this print.



well done on the art, love it.



check out my first critique submission ::

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44211/emo

So as it was asked, i tried it on a model.

I had to make it a little smaller.



I you have any sugestion about the placement.



And how i can control the number of color cause threadless doesn't more than 8 colors, isnt it right ?



I'm very excited about this design. Thank's to all for the help you already provided !

Thats a cool design, would it make more sense if he was popping out of a pot? Although I guess then all of them would be doing it. It doesn't look like it really needs more work.



Can you have a look at mine?

Is that a banana?

Hi everybody !



I did some very little change and clean more precisly the image.

I think i gonna submit today.

I'm very exciting about that but a little scared too, because i really want that this one get a lot of good vote so i can have my first T-shirt print by threadless.



Thank to all of you for your precious help.

This is pretty cool. Good luck with the vote :)

great idea ... just a thought ... will look better if the corn was cooking ...

plz critique mine ...

Who is he ???

lol i had a little problem of copywrite with mister Superman ^^

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Thanks again for your help !

bump :-)

haha, nice little promo you got there!

off to vote