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better painted (this version) or the previous one with flat colors?
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I like it better painted. I think it was a good choice since the shirt was colored already. Also glad to see the flames are gone.
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unless the gradients ar ehalf-tones I dont see how this could be within the 8 color limit!
I do like the design, keep it up! plz vote here |
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waw super colorisation!
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@ikke, Threadless uses the imposition process, or something like that. If i'm not wrong (refering to other printed t-shirts) they can print a photograph. Take a look at the catalogue :) and thanx for the comment :)
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haha, I like it alot, and like what you've changed to it! Don't really see anything that needs to be changed at this point ;)
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agrimony on May 18 '09 i like this! and yeah has to use simulated process. no worries.
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i'll try a different palette or a different color on the tee, on natural color is weak ;)
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smusi on May 18 '09 the horse's eye is freaking me out a little. can you get rid of the white and make it look more relaxed? the body position is so it would be nice to see the head's and body's moods match up.
also, when horses open their mouths you can always see their teeth. you might want to add some. try flickr. that's where i go when i'm not sure how something should look. the painted image is very nice. |
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yeah this is awesome ... i reckon maybe a less 'awed' look on the horses face would push this into amazing town, but i really love the art and position.
love it. anyone wanna critique my first ever? http://www.threadless.com/critique/44211/emo |
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Jebs on May 18 '09 no doubt you are talented clearcut, but this time, i really think it lacks something strong in concept ;)
The "centaurus" is great, but an add would be helpful...i don't know what by now... |
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HorsefaceDee on May 18 '09 haha this is a funny illo
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@jebs, i know... in fact i'm taking a break to figure out what's missing..... i drew a little flame in the prev version, but i was not satisfied.... Sometimes i just need time to "digest" the illustration and see how can i improve it. :) thanx for the comments!
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smusi on May 18 '09 an easy fix to give it a little something more is maybe to do something funny on the horse's shirt.
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heeh, yep, i was temped to draw an old fashioned centaurus. I need time to figure it out :) thanx smusi!
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digsy on May 19 '09 looks great painted.
agree with smusi that it could do with some teeth, otherwise i like - can't wait to see what you come back with next! please can you tell me if you think it's worth pursuing this? |
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wow its full of awesomeness, it really strucks you.
Check my first ever http://www.threadless.com/critique/44272/White_Jaguar |
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Jebs on May 20 '09 ok clearcut, i think patience is your best friend here, to finalize it and have a great final overall design, and a possible winning tee ;)
if i have an idea, i'll tell you for sure! |
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I think its brilliant.
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oh, check my slogans out too.
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