change the text or make it into more of a picture book caption

i meant the font.

Would it be better written like the Ugly shirt?

hee hee hee

nope not like the Ugly shirt.

i dont think that one would ever get printed, i dont think people like the doodle sort of designs. even when theyre a good idea it just feels like it wasnt much effort. (not that im saying it wasnt) you should work back into them

i dig your dinosaurs

cool, ok i'll try out some other fonts- can you suggest any that may work? i always have trouble with fonts.

Original in writing...

Arial...any suggestions?

I like v2 the best, but if you want this one to go far, take the text off

I like the handwritten text. I think you need to punch up the drawing with some colour though.

Jazz up your presentation too. Display just the design on a solid colour field so it can be larger and show the detail. You can put a little T-shirt (or a photoshopped model) off to the side to show placement.

the 2nd text is best

the second text is best, i retract my earlier comments, it still needs somthing though. it still looks like a draft.

something?? what does it need....?? anyone who can advice i'm very grateful.

Here are some new versions- alternatives of colour and at the top without writing. Any comments before i submit?

with hand adjustment...

Text in V2 is best.

maybe just the picture? make the tv dinner more visible and it'll speak for itself!

ok, think i'll re do this one. Maybe with better writing and make the pic better.

The best is V2, i think u need to work on Rex.

Brilliant.



Hand written text all the way.

It has to be hand written text for it to work. Why not try without the text, you really don't need it and then people can get what they want from it.

this is an awesome idea! would love it if you make the text hand drawn

make the text hand drawn is a good advice. i wanna hug the t-rex when he's done eating!

placement is awkward, how about make him bigger and on the corner?