Hahaha this is really cute. I think the idea is there and cant wait to see it cleaned up. I would stick with a simple color palette since the images has so much personality.
Ha-ha! Maybe an open box on his lap like he's taking the tie out of it. I think the tie should be more counter-dark side, like a paisley or pastel pattern on it. I'm not sure about trademark stuff, might be a problem, all though Glennz did him from behind and it got printed. Anyway, great idea and the sketch looks very cool. Cheers!
^ What's with the "finish it" comments. Critique is for development and working towards a finish, given constructive criticism. "Finish it" offers no help at all. Offer some suggestions next time if you want to be helpful.
changed up the tie's design and dedicated 2 shades to vader (3 with the shirt's color) as I needed a bit more to make him look less like a mish-mash of random shapes.
The shading on young luke looks to be too overpowering, and almost messy looking versus darths shading. Perhaps less halftones, and more solid shading like you did darth? or perhaps just make the half tone patters more spread out so that it has a lighter feel to it...mostly on his hair and legs/feet is what seems a bit too much.
Great, and fun idea tho :) Looking forward to seeing more!
Daddy got a tie with a rebel symbol on it, Jr. got a familiarly shaped rubix sphere, and the young lady got a particular bikini.