I wanted to make something cool out of swirls, and in the process created a face. Any feedback is appreciated!

Wow it really jumps out at you- kinda psychadelic! I cant seem to see the face though, maybe its just me.

i can see the face! nice design - i really like the style and overall effect.

something about the colour is bothering me though - i thought maybe it jsut didn't go on the navy shirt but then i don't particularly like it on the other shirts either... maybe a gold shirt or making the design a lighter blue to put on a navy shirt? i dunno, it just doesn't sit well for me at the moment.



if you can, please vote on my robot and comment on my elephant

thanks!

Lose the triangles in the back and it will really pop



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Would love

to have your feedback on this!

Thanks for the input! Prepping second version...

Hey mister fasterflame I got my latest motorcone up for crit. If youve got the time check it out! Keen to see your next version.

http://www.threadless.com/ctitque/41440/motorcone

The triangular areas make this look like its some extra ceremonial garment worn over the tshirt. Perhaps try it without it or bring the colour of the print closer to the tshirt colour so there is less contrast.



Crit mine?

Transport through the ages

The stripes have been chucked out. Let me know what you think!

You're right. It does look snazzy. Only when I first saw it, it looked like a bug's head. But really cool. ^-^

Heh. Thanks!

Chill out with your presentation and just give us the graphics!



This does look pretty cool but your shirt only features in about 25% of the presentation. Make it 100%!



Have you read the reasons for rejection document? There is something in there about printing over seams.

I think the presentation is the best I've seen actually.



I think the problem with this is that the big orange swirl in the center is a bit too like... big... too much of the same colour I think. You should trying having some dark brown swirls flowing out of it, like you did for the top one.

hey this is cool! looks like you haven't done anything on it in a while, so don't give up on it yet! i think you might want to make the swirls from the face a little thinner to make it balance a little more. :]