There is just something sensuous about bubble gum, and after listening to Cornelius' single "Gum", I changed an old idea and made a bubble gum factory. Thoughts?

I'm new around here so I'm no expert but I like it. Just looking at it I don't get that it's bubblegum except that it's pink. What if the bubbles were round? The cone shape throws me off.

good idea Lydia

can anyone think of anything else that I could add to make this a better Cornelius submission?

You just added pink blobs to Made in Internet, which people didn't like either. You need to do something completely new.

Yeah as I said I "changed an old idea" to try and not only make more sense out of it but submit it for this contest. I quite like the look of it and it seems its getting mixed reviews so I am going to keep at it and try and make allterations for the better.

Any ideas on what else I could do to make it more of a new aged japanese robot bubble gum factory? lol.

...but the theme of the competition isn't 'gum'... it's SENSUOUS. take the theme and try to do something with that.