This is just the start of my design, I'm intending to continuing the animals up the shirt with each row being more distant to give the sense of the audience going back.



I'm just looking for any crits suggestions etc

looks great so far. i don't really have any suggestions as it looks like a strong start. the characters and intersting and the idea quite strong, looking forward to seeing further versions.



if you can, please vote on my robot and comment on my elephant

thanks

I agree with the last comments - I think if you left it how it is now the shirt would look quite bare but if you keep adding more rows and filling up the shirt, it'll look real good. Cool idea.

Check out mine-

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41440/motorcone