- smaller scaled design

yes it's litle too big and maybe place it diferent







please crit this and this. thanks

Maybe, just maybe ma'am. You might wanna loose the bevel and emboss.



Making the foot print feel like... well a set of foot prints on a shirt.



Otherwise, a snappy design!

Looks great! I agree that it might be an idea to get rid of the emboss. Maybe a lighter colour shirt as well might be nice? I really like the idea though! :) :) :) Well done!

Nice idea but I would move the placement of the design a little higher up on the shirt. And I don't know, it could just be me here, but I actually like the contrast between the black shirt and purple font (unlike what Misa-Meeka said).



If you have some time, would you mind critiquing my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43778/Looks_Can_Be_Deceiving

I think Kawaldo's suggestions are good. would be fun to have the prints walking around the shirt!

please don't spam your crit on other people's designs, thanks

^^^ was done on my design so i didn't' think there was a problem with doing it also.



everyone else, thanks for the feedback.

what about footsteps across the shirt?

spelling out step on it with the footsteps?

eh?

check my design and comment please...

Would love

to have your feedback on this!

Yeah I do agree with the effects on the prints, just the shape would make it seem more realistic. Also, I'd prefer a less striking set of colours. Overall a nice idea, just gotta work on it a bit more.