For the less is more contest. Another idea that came to me. what do you guys think?

k, maybe this makes the idea clearer. Added health bars :D

A bit hard to understand, but I got it after taking a second look. Less junk food means more HP = health points, and more junk food means less HP, making the bottom right image showing a person with overgrown hair? Am I right?



Maybe you should rework on the fries, they all look the same length, and not yellow colored? Also, place a few more details on the burger like veggies, tartar sauce? Hope this helps (:



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yeah it looks like more junk food more health lol

it's good like a plublicity but I can't imaginate wearink a tee with this

Hey, thanks for the c omments guys. Maybe I should put "age" instead of "HP"? Less junk food means more chances of living longer. That's what I was going for. And I would love to put more detail on the burger but I dont know how. Im out of colorsss :( Will change the fries.

The idea is a little unclear to me (i'm sorry to say that) Definetly add some more details like making the fries longer and rework the colors. Also the fries look really angular to me. I dont know if that was what you were going for or not but after a little more work it will look great!



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less chances of growing old.



I hope it is a little clear now.

Made the lines thinner and changed the life/age bars. hope its clearer now. Let me know what yu guys think.

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I like the idea, but the representation may be too literal?



Please help me with my latest:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45348/Epiphany

Hmmmmm. At first glance, it looks like the design says that the more junk food you eat, the younger you stay :P Maybe the youngest person can look more sick/depressing, while the oldest can look happier, and with no wrinkles? :) I like the idea, though :)



If it's not too much trouble, would you mind helping me out with my design too? :) Thanks!

Good idea.

I'm not a real fan of the colors.

Like nyarn, i think the message is not clear enough.



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