Concept is fairly self-explanatory.



I was thinking of Placement in the center at either chest to mid-riff.



I think I may change the detail of the Wagon, possibly change colors.



Another idea is to have multiple, smaller turtles instead.



Let me know what you think.

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I think multiple turtles would be better.



The turtle looks great with the light coloured outlines. The wagon would look better with the same level of detail and also with light coloured outlines instead of black.



The words Turtle Power aren't needed.



good idea.

More Turtles, No text, more detail on wagon.

Bump

Wow, looks cool.

I like the quality of the ilustration, but i think the black looks a more stronger than the others colors.

maybe one guy in the wagon would look funny

Think about it

keep working!

Please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43445/Less_is_more

Thanks a lot!

Any other thoughts?

Im not so sure about the ropes? they stand out from the design but thats because they aren't the same style as the rest of it. I think you could all the element of black into the rest of the design as well. This is going to be a wicked shirt when its done though. well done




Could you vote for my design 1



Could you vote for my design 2

I was thinking of changing the ropes to have two colors(shaded look) and make it either a darker green pairing or a brown or beige pairing.

try a beige for the ropes (in two colors), and the shadow for the wagon is too squared, i like that there is no background, but you must try a "sandy" tshirt color



comment mine

Redid the Rope and the wagon shadow, changed the background to the sand color.

i believe this idea would look better if it had abit more feeling too it, the like if the turtles where looking at you or something.. just an idea because the drawing is nice but it feels like it missing something

you could help me with mine if you wanted too :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47121/electric#v2

Any other suggestions?

I think you should add some texture to the trolley.

And also I would change the colours to make the whole look more retro-like...do you know what I mean??





Can you help me on my design??

Distance Love

have a hare driving the wagon to reference the fable with a whip lashing over the turtles



cream on the canvas of the wagon would be better too, and wood on the wooden bits



nice idea tho

keep going!!!



I would appreciate your feedback

Is it the same turtle four times in the front?

Can you reposition a fin or two to help breakup that impression?

I'll definitely alter the turtles slightly to make them actually unique.



I'm not sure about adding a hare though, I wasn't really going for tortoise vs. hare. More TMNT play on words.

I agree that someone should be lashing a whip at them. Can it be a ninja--lashing his nunchuks?? This design is great and I hope you keep going with it, but it needs more personality somehow. And why sea turtles and not land tortoises?

Nice idea! Although the whole thing looks as though youve taken a jpg and used the live trace tool in illustrator. i think there is a good opportunity to develop an illustrative style here. the idea is there. you just need to figure out a way to set it apart from the rest of the submissions in the pack!



please comment mine:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47411/Patience_Young_Grasshopper

i agree with some of the comments, the trolley need some lines to make it look more lifelike



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47416/all_tied_up halp

this is the best version so far. I would try addig a harness or something on the turtle, to convey the feeling that they are attached to the wagon for good. (what if they withdraw their heads? :D)

like other said, add a stagecoach driver, and make the turtles more unique. a few small detail stones, rocks and sand will help too.

This version is def an improvement over the others.



A random suggestion (just brain storming)-- Cactii in the background using the same greens. Also the rope is much improved but doesn't necessarily look attached. Maybe a loose bit dangling at the carriage end?



It'd be great if you could critique the latest version of my design - Never mind the tigers...

I agree with Tigerbill. This submission is the best version i reckon. Would be interested to see it place on a shirt.



You could maybe add some bits near the turtles and the wagon to create an illusion of road or sand or something. Just very little but i think it'll help the composition. Otherwise, its pretty cool.



Mind if you critique my design please? Terra Micro

haha excellent idea, try doing something to those ropes, they look kind of weird, but allover great idea and design as well!

comment on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/53823/Tiger#v5

this feels too "live trace"

maybe try drawing it by hand and making it unique with your own style