one of my old illustrations... maybe it can be intrestins like tee print...?

any suggestion?

Nice drawing, the bark looks really cool. Smack some color on her and she should looks sweet. And some of the hair looks like its blowing unnaturally, unless its supposed to be branches, in which case, that's friggin cool.



Got another version up if you want to take a gander.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43238/Garroted_Grub

hers are supposed be herbs and branches...

its a drawing along one warhammer character (figurine)

Ah, ok. Never played it....and I'm half blind haha.

I'd like to see the hair looking a bit more natural. I'd keep it black and white too.

start of coloration... continue?

Well, yes... it appears you know what you're doing, and you won't tend to overdo stuff. And thanks for the comments on Candidate X. There's a new Scaramouche, if you'd care to crit.

add more color.. a red dress i guess?? nice illo!!! love the details!!!

cheers!!!

Like this more... =)



btw, i;ve got a new colour for the T, have a look =)

ttp://www.threadless.com/critique/43530/Y_uuml#v3

very nice. do continue.



check mine:

Hope

Timeless Rock

Guitarist

nice :P kinda reminded me of a mermaid. but a tree mermaid.... http://www.threadless.com/critique/43611/Shapes

nice .. like the illustrations ... may be dark colors ...

plz critique mine ...

Seee Hear Speak

Colours are looking good. Try on a tee

It looks good, but needs a few minor tweaks. Her left breast is on sideways. It needs to be more in front of her. Her right arm (especially the wrist) is gripping the spear strangely. Try that grip with a broom handle. It would be painful.

Thanks for coments



Francesa: I'not completly sure cuderstund but concerning gripping of staff booth are possible. I'prefere this one beacauce is easier to manipulate the staff like a weapon now. I wille study the remains of your coment. Thanks :)

i can imagine u make the line one colous, exp grey, and u give one other bright colour accent, maybe red. it will give nice effect for the detail.

I feel like this needs some color down in the lower half... what about that green used for the lines of the tree done as a gradient going up into the brown for the skirt? I don't think I'd add to the palette at all (too distracting for this drawing), so a gradient would give you some variety in the broad empty space of the skirt and keep it tied into the tree trunk.



would you be willing to have a look at my slogans?

bygristow:Thans for coments. I'm sorry but my englis is not good for undersant your slogans.



ok I wil try version with gradient only

better improvments, continue ;)

quick gradient draw

Oh wow I like this a lot more than the previous versions. More objects might be needed on the actual tee though. Something simple like blowing leaves. Good stuff.

I agree some objects to fill the large negative space would be a definite plus. looks really nice otherwise.

great details!

I like it! i think you need some kind of a background, otherwise it`s great! keep on the good work!

Awesomeness. Love the detail. Dont much like the face though. Everything else is in fine detail while the face seems simple to me. Maybe its just me. Overall, I love the design so far :)



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The World is Your Canvas

Hope

Timeless Rock

Guitarist

you should have the roots start on the side then have the trunk wrap around and up to the center of the chest i think that would look sweet

i don't know about a background, but i think the roots of the tree could be a bigger which would fill a lot of the negative space and make it more interesting in shape. the gradient is awesome though, the whole illustration is fantastic actually, just needs some more tweaks and maybe we can see some placement too?



could you please vote on my robot and comment on my elephant.

thanks!

I love how long and delicate this piece is but I think the neck and ear area is a bit off. Maybe if the neck was more slender it would match the rest of the pic? Otherwise....I really enjoy the simplicity of colour and lack of background....it lets you enjoy the beautiful detailing and atmosphere of the overall image:)

I think it looks absolutely great except for her face. The proportions are off, try some artistic shading to cover up the parts that you cant seem to get right.

this is awsome I agree with the others about the face but I dont think it needs a background personally



crit mine if you want

This is way better than the other version. Really nice work :D



New version up! crit mine? Thanks!!!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43410/Ouch#lastcomment

I agree with odd one, needs some background elements. Maybe a light forest texture behind? I would also work on placement at this point.

I'm working at the final version of design.

Now it's only slight modyfi old version with bacground (my other old ilustration).



It's better with background or not? This one or other one?

Wow, amazing illustration. I like it with the background.



Crit mine please.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43744/Dystopian_Flying_Devices

I love it!

yes! this looks good! you might want to play with colors to bring out the design though hmm... and can i see it on a tee? usually im not sure how these oversized prints would turn out :)

Excellent drawing- Here's a thought: since this is an Enchantress, what about someone or something shown for her to enchant, say an unsuspecting, sleeping animal or peasant kid? That might put it in a "Midsummer Night's Dream" kind of context. Just a thought.

beautiful design. i would try making the woman a bolder color so it stands out even more rather than the brown.

I think this looks pretty good as it, it really depends how it looks on the tshirt.

place it on a shirt please...

Any Comments on mine?

Gorgeous! This is such a great improvement over the previous versions! I actually like the enchantress in brown, it looks great over the grey background, very natural and sketchy. Would also like to see placement - one suggestion could be having her down one side of the tee and then the woods extending over to the other side.



Lovely work!



Mind scoring/commenting on my sub Watched (1 day left!) and having a look at my crit?

Background and gradient both look very strong, makes it feel very good as an image, how does it size up on a tee?





new verison, 10 Flamingos!

Very nice, put in on a shirt tho. I personally like to see it really large and off to the side. Cheers.

incredible line work... can't wait to see placement.



Hit me back

ok thank you. I will worke it and I will show next version nex week.

If you like this desig, you can like too.



Than you for yours critics and votes.

placement

I'm working on a final version of image...

thats amazing. looks beautiful. I could only suggest maybe you need something on the bottom right corner so it looks like the character is pointing to a subject.



can you check mine please. Ive done what you asked me to change. :)





Envied

i cant see the detail!



can you check mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44420/melody

just beautiful id buy it



http://www.threadless.com/critique/44364/WELCOME_TO_STEREOHOOD



=D

this is very lovely. maybe add some textured light yellow fill in her dress?

thanks :) I' working on a final version still

woow this is awesome great, I'll be looking forward to your next v! If you got time my A Ladder to Heaven is up for scoring ! :D

This is looking really nice! Post close ups on your next version, cause I really wanna see them.

Yes, bigger illo next time. Otherwise it looks terrific. I like the idea of putting something/someone where she's pointing at. I don't know what it might be, it's your fantasy place, who else is living living there? Ha-ha! Anyway, it's looking really good, can't wait to see the next V. Cheers!

only esquisse of different versions: what animal like a goal of conjuring ? Owl, Frog or rabbit?

i think the owl works well, because you don't have to expand the ground for that.

and the wings of the owl fit the wavy/curly clothes of the woman best.

I think the owl is the best too, although its style seems a little out of place at the moment.

go with the toad. the rabbit and owl seem different from the style of the rest of the tshirt. plus the owl blocks some of the image. i think the toad looks like it belongs there since it's a simple sketch surrounded by white space.

I think the owl is more fitting for the figure. Its more majestic and seems like an actual animal she would have for a pet. The rabbit and toad seem to lowly and would add a comical aspect to it and I don't think that's what you're going for. It helps a lot that she is pointing at something now, great improvement!

Yeah, I like the owl the best.

Wow, your illustration is great, i also think owl is the best, i think your owl should draw same style with the enchantress. And how about fill a red color for the dress.

gian12: it only esquisse version, not final animals



owl: 5

toad: 1

rabbit: 0



ok i will working the owl :)

amazing illustration! looking forward to seeing the owl!

Wow this has improved a lot since version one:)

I think the owl will look great, especially when your add the detail to it. I think it's almost ready to win:)

Keep it up!

If I were to add any of the animals it would be the owl. It fits best.



Take a look at mine, if you've got time.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44848/Growth_from_the_heart

Thank you.

owl final version

great design ... color it with same colors as woman ...

plz critique mine ...

Who is he ???

I like that owl more than the rest of the illustration. I'd be interested in seeing what other types of designs it could be incorporated into rather than the mytho/fantasy realm.

You've done some really good stuff since I last looked! Verrrrry nice.

Looks very good :) I think its almost about ready. Good luck :)



I would appreciate your vote on my design, Hope. Thanks :)

I'm working on vectoriel version....

lovely line work and coloring. the owl is just gorgeous!

Amazing work. I think the owl should be a different color than the enchantress, but that's just me.



Critique: Check Your Mate

good artwork I would like to see placement on this. I also think the owl should be a little different but that might not work great if your at your color limit.



if you get a chance

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44957/N_A

thanks

Great work here. My only suggestion would be to not put as much detail into the background and foreground elements. Just simple linework would suffice so as to not distract the eye from the character, as she is the main subject. While it is good to have background and foreground elements to create a sense of depth, too much detail only takes away from your composition as a whole. Just as great photographers have the focus on what they want you to look at and the rest blurred out, it might be a good idea to keep the only detailed area as your focus. Otherwise, the colouring is great and I don't have any other suggestions.



Hope that helps.

It's great, but i'd like to see more detail around the face. It feels a bit like too much is detailed, and for a tee, that can be very distracting. Many reduce the background detail, and focus on one or two elements to make solid coloured/ detailed.



I love the owl! Beautiful movement from sketch to line work.



Hey, maybe you can critique my new one (in sketch phase right now), Psychedelic Soup?

Matthew.Ogram: look at V3



destructomatic: not simple if I wont have working in vectors. I replace focus by colors and intensity of colors. If a use blure, it wille not bee acept - it' snot possible to imprint



greenttentacle : look for V3

Nice, maybe u can make the owl color blend like the enchantress.