wow. Love the hair and eyes.

it's a 5! Submit!

Feeling Stuck?
Blobs.

She is peering into my soul! Great perspective and interesting rendering.

thanks :) It's my illustration of my INS character - daemon of fire in a body of 12 years old schoolgirl ;)

Why weren't 12 year-old schoolgirls like this when I was 14?- I know why, so I wouldn't go to jail!
Sorry... But this is exquisite. Shame on you! $5.- And by the way, that website wouldn't translate into English for me. My loss...

placement?! :)

I like it !!! Great choice of color with the blue and orange. I also like the perspective on the artwork.

i love how you do this.. put some objects in the background to make it more interesting... some object related to your title...

maybe a floor, pattern or something? just kinda bouncing off jasonwave's "objects in the background"

Very good art work, reminds me of Amercian McGee's Alice. Will there be a problem with the colors? Since you have some gradients and shading that I think puts you over the 8 colors.

Nice perspective. you could try on a darker tee.

jasonwave, DaniMA,mammalwear: I wille try it

genghis: dificult to know how they calculate the colors with gradients. I'm not sure. Normaly there are 7 colors with gradients...but...

there is a bug... version 5 is OK... thes others... it's a error of system. look v5 please

wow! it's not a design I would wear, but it comes on strong.

Personally, I'd shrink the placement on the shirt slightly, and drop the shadow, for the sub.

Maybe strew a few matches around the box; she just dropped it so she wouldn't get caught holding it, after all.....

Good work.

bygrinstow: good idea! thanks

v5 looks very nice. try changing the tie and the skirt to red. see if that looks better.

check mine:
Hope
Timeless Rock
Guitarist

VVolf: red ist too much agresive

Well, I thought she was being aggresive with her looking straight at you wihtout flinching :) It's also passionate and stands for love in some circles. Blue's just as good though :)

Check this one:
Less Junk Food is More Health

Oh, title also says little devil so red came to my head.

VVolf: yes but she is a deamon's incarnation. It must be present delicatly - deamon (devil) wants to look like a litle girl... but evrybody looking into hers eyes , he must feel thaht she is'n only litle girl...

nice illo...I like the placement too..I amt a fan of the colour of tee tho...try a few different colours

Crazy!!! I love it!! It's high impact, in your face art. The colours are really strong which suits the perspective and line work perfectly!!

Awesome! really stands out well. My only comment would be to make the image a little smaller - it might lose some impact on a real shirt which isn't perfectly flat.
check out mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/41440/motorcone

permanent: the face of "litle devil" must be place over the breasts, so it can 't be too small...

Make the design just a little smaller. It also looks heavily metallic almost unhuman. Maybe downsize any reflections u did? Give the design a little more fleshy look? Just ideas. It looks good but needs some more work. Keep it up!

Critique The Hand Man Please!

what tee color?

3

#2. Stunning.

i prefer number 6!!! :D great great!!!

The drawing is good, but im not so sure about the shading. (plus i think it breaks the 8-colors-limitation). Maybe do the shades with more solid colors, or halftones. As for the tee I think color #3 would fit best.

3 answers differents... it isn't realy trenchant

I would go with 3. Goodluck.

ill go with 9!!!

great design, i'd go with 2,5 or 8. Not 9, the red shirt takes away the impact from the red hair in the illustration and not 3 for the same reason but with the blue skirt.

I think 3 offers the best contrast and makes it unisex as well.

Thanks for the critique.

I like 6...and are you sure it's still eight colors?

6 brings out her face, but overall i'd go with 3.

1, 4: no
2: 2 votes
3: 5 votes
5, 8, 9: 1votes
6: 3 votes
................intresting.

Other opinions?

i feel like ur art gets lost in 3

so i vote for 2 + 9 (:

I think it works on many colours, but I prefer the lighter colours, such as 1-2, 4-5, 7-8

6
Any Comments on mine?

3 or 6. I LIKE the idea that she melts into the tee a little more with the shadowing so go darker tee not lighter. But you cant please everyone - so on your final submit show 3 options.

Shouldn't she have a tail? and a pitchfork? The artwork is top notch, but add something to give it a theme.

Hit me back

1, 4,5,7,8: 1 vote
9: 2 votes
2: 3 votes
6: 5 votes
3: 6 votes

Resistance: in glow ink maybe ;)

Very interesting perspective and great illo.

Maybe a bit smoother, less blotchy under the chin. And maybe close the chin line, there's no other open lines except on the ankles (I'd close those too). Either that or add some broken lines to the shirt and skirt, so all the line work is in the same style, and/or compatible with each other.

As far as shirt colors go, do like you did on V5 with your favorite color, (I hope not white) as the background and use your second favorite on the model. Look at all the printed designs and click on the original subs, you won't find more than 3 colors shown unless they did a flash presentation. Too many colors is too much.

Anyway, great work. Cheers!

1, 5 and 9. but a slightly smaller placement

Also, maybe put the lit match (white side stuck in amongst the red tips) to add a bit more drama to the arson/pyromania story. And I wouldn't sign your designs, it's not a gallery and it's a bit pretentious. Cheers!

thank you for coments.

Quister: I'm not sur to understend completly (my english is not good) but I will try repods:
- this is only working version for determinete colors of tee
- they are more line breake in the image, you need zoom in ;)
- original is sign, but this version not
- I dont know what do you meen

Sorry!
OK, I understand.
My last suggestion was to put a lit match burning down to the unlit matches. I don't know, maybe not. The matchbox you have now get the point across. Anyway, awesome illustration. Cheers!
match burning down to light others

XD id go with 2 0r 6

Forgot to say I like 3 best, 6 and 9 also look real good.

with a litle animation ;)

The button is not working for me Grafica, don't know why. Maybe it's just me, see if anyone else has a problem with it. Cheers!

Button doesn't work for me either.

Also, she's kind of pixalated, is that the original illustrations res, or just the gif?

Button doesn't work for me either.

Also, she's kind of pixalated, is that the original illustrations res, or just the gif?

yeah, something about the style. Like it's ueber shaded or something.

Give it to me straight

I Like It With a Blue Top actually Just to let you know it just makes the Pic Pop!

Dark Blue that is No 3 in the previous...

like the illy
the short strand of hair over her right shoulder and looks a bit oddlike its been cut off
oh and bursh stroke by her right heel sticks out and looks a bit odd
but im just being nit picky, i think its ready

i'd really appreciate your comment/vote

repared
look into her's eyes for 30 sec ;)

you should try to think of something about the gradients, it would be declinjed unless it's under 8 colors! well thats what i heard but im seeing shirts that get printed even with gradients, anyway goodluck

good design.shading is very cool.I think it's better if the decoration add cigarettes, as the title Little Devil so make it naughty....i'm a newbie, maybe other opinion is better than me.


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I think it's far too big in the placement. For a little devil, she's fucking huge. Scale it down, and it'll give more of a accusing sense to the design, we'll really feel like we're looking down at her, and she's looking back at us. Right now her head is as big as the person's wearing the shirt.

Also, I'm not quite sure the colors are working for me. I don't think the light blue t-shirt you're using as the base is working well - but more importantly, I'm not sure the gradient style coloring looks as good as it could. I'm not a fan of gradient coloring in the first place, but overall the incredibly neon-ish like tones of your colors really don't work for me.

Also, I think the illo would work better if the girl had more of a softer, younger face, with innocent eyes yet a sly smile, instead of the borderline slutty 20-something-year-old face that the girl currently sports.

bry yrb: They are a lot of designes accepted having more 8 colors. I can do this with 6 colors with gradients, but it's lesse nice. I'm not sur how they calculate the colors and gradients.
It's possible to simulate cmyk proces, donc maybe ....
I'have a vector version vith simple color only, but it is not very nice.

ayearinreview: litle devil - it meen that a gril is young not thaht she is small. I'm sorry but I'm not sur tu understant all of you propositions

Then perhaps I wasn't clear. I guess I'll have to explain further:

The design is too big. Simple as that. Scaling the design down on the t-shirt will not make her look like a tiny person (and nor should she be a tiny person), but rather make the design fit, and enhance the perspective of the illo. You've drawn her in a way that suggests she's looking up at us, as if we've caught her in the act. If the design was scaled down to around, say, 3/4ths the size that it is now, it would only enhance the perspective, help center the eyes on the entire illustration, and not have us pulling back and trying to make sense of it.

Look at the size of the model's head, now look at the size of the head on the design. They're pretty much the same. The head is so huge, that my eyes tend to not want to look at anything else but that - therefore missing the chalk and eraser, the rest of the design, etc.

Try showing a few more different models wearing the shirt, instead of the one you're using now. For a fantastic selection of models and shirts that more easily translate a design's placement if it were actually printed, follow this link here ...

http://www.flickr.com/groups/lessthread/pool/

And, as far as the rest of the points I made ...


Also, I'm not quite sure the colors are working for me. I don't think the light blue t-shirt you're using as the base is working well - but more importantly, I'm not sure the gradient style coloring works. I'm not a fan of gradient coloring in the first place, but overall the incredibly neon-ish like tones of your colors really don't work for me.

Also, I think the illo would work better if the girl had more of a softer, younger face, with innocent eyes yet a sly smile, instead of the borderline slutty 20-something-year-old face that the girl currently sports.

I don't think they really need more elaboration.

ayearinreview: I wanted a real size - same saze image like a real human. But I can try do smaler.

I' choos this model beacaus I think thal a girls expresion is good for my design.

I' dont no what do jou meen : neon-ish like tones of your colors. They are not noen colors.

You are a first person mentioned that this girls loook like a 20 years old.... so I'm stunned

I just think it's worth experimenting with. I'm by no means certain that making the design smaller will make everything suddenly click and come into place. Yet, when I look at the size of the design on the shirt, it just blatantly seems too large. Be gradual with your size experimentation: shrink it a tiny bit, see how it looks. Shrink it a tiny bit more, and see how it looks. And so on, and so on.

By colors, I mean the colors are far too bold. They're very strong. Perhaps less saturated tones is worth experimenting with.

And yeah, I think she looks kind of mature. As in a 20-something year old wearing a school girl's costume. That's the least of my concerns with the design, however.

ayearinreview: I wont a slyle "manga" and the colors of hears is a faire color (it's in origine a odl deamon of faire in a body of a litle girls - my ilustration of a avatare for RPG - INS)

I wille trying differents size, but I'like the colors there is a sens behainde ;) and I dont think be able changing face fore more kids one. sorry

How important is the idea that this girl is the embodiment of a daemon? Unless you explain very clearly in your sub, no one is going to look at this design and think that this is a daemon of fire in a body of 12 year old schoolgirl. People are going to assume this is some sort of naughty schoolgirl type scenario. And, should you explain to them that this is a daemon of fire in a body of 12 years old schoolgirl, do you think there's enough universal appeal to that concept?

It's just things to consider.

of course, a image have not a explications in a life, but generaly people seethat are already seen this image feel that she is not only inocent girl... you are a first one having different opinion. But it's not possible to create somenting generaly charming things...
But thanks for yours comments

size down

Looks a lot better now, size wise.

I see no Diff But its GREAT

Very nice. Just noticing a slight hitch on her right leg though, right near the foot. The outline seems wrong. Photoprint??

Check mine:
The Long Arm(s) of the Law???

CupidsArroe: look for placement - it's smaller in tee

Vvolf: it's ankle, and in this perspective... it loook like this... dificult drawig it, but without it's stange

very nice! :))

awesome go with it

Thanks
Others remarks?

scattered matches
; )


looks great

the matches look too "clear" to me- like their focus is too sharp, maybe? could you fuzz them out a little more? i also feel the back of her head isn't quite big enough, or her "bangs" start too far back on her skull.

all that aside, I'm not sure how threadless is going to handle your gradients.. really unique design, though.

just a little probleme on the low of her right leg. Just up to her shoe.
Good work.

Please, give me some feedback on My Super Corn... ;-)

pseudofemme: good remark for matches :) She has my head form (I've got a model...so I toke a photo for me ;)) but you have truths - my forehead is bigg ;)) I wille try changing this...

the image is very good, but how would be the shirt?

asiscortes: eitherI dont understand your question or your didnt look at PLACEMENT onglet ;)

corrige

finals corrections

I like this, but to me the back of her head seems too small or something. I could just be me. Otherwise very cool.

please crit mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/43432/Lady_Thug

i like the perspective of this one...
maybe emphasize more on the matchbox, to get the idea of a devil a bit stronger... maybe some more matches laying around, and some already burnt... otherwise you can easily miss the idea behind it.
nice use of colors :-)

my Sub Shoal is up for voting :-)
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I think this design is really vivid and pretty cool. The only thing that seems a little down played to me is the matches, while I think they should be subtle and not too obvious at the moment they seem a little thin and while they are probably proportionately correct they just look like lines in the design.
Otherwise I think this is ready to submit.

suitandty: difficult to change it now...
matths:already burnt matches - good idea
rogerthecamel: I'm not sure understand... sorry. Can you try explain il simpler? My english is'n good :-S If you speak franch... ;)

Is it the left eye brown overlap the hair?

nice! like it...

please vote for my sheeps! thanks!

I like it:)
Submit.
Although I do agree with more matches and some already used.

more matches and some already used :)

I Like IT!

Have you actually sent it in yet??? Any of them???

version submited: there

So you haven't sent in any 'Little Devil's Yet?

If you like this design vote:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/213488/the_little_devil

nice...are the eyes going to change color on the shirt with UV ink or something?

please have a look at mine!
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